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- "Although I would have preferred your work came through you and wasn't about you, it is one of the better writes I've come across ...poignant use of words that titillate all my five senses"
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "make it last" by FindAgentX
- "It's a grungy love, realistic and down to earth. optimistic, almost, for the future and retaining fond memories. I can almost smell the smoke and the sweat lingering on his shirt. very nicely done."
Posted by Unknown on "make it last" by FindAgentX
- "it's nice to see you post again. this made me sigh heavily. i hope things work out this time, i think you both deserve it. love you."
Posted by dramamine on "make it last" by FindAgentX
- "so lovely...being in a good relationship is one of the best things there is...i really liked this poem a lot, wish you both love and happiness, write on "
Posted by Unknown on "make it last" by FindAgentX
- "ohh, my, quite strong...
in many ways the three years that i was actively involved with raven i was her life support... and when i thought she was done with me for the last time (yeah right) i was relieved because i would not be the one getting "the call" so i could survive past her, simply by not knowing
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Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "breathing machine" by FindAgentX
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