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make it last
By FindAgentX
the darkest blue eyes i ever did see are haunting me.
sipping on crown
cause i miss the taste of nibbling it off of his bottom lip
intense stares and grins.
"what?"
"you. just you. you're something else, baby."
is a repeating pattern these days
one i could get used to,
like snuggling into one of his comfortable shirts.
like nudging his jawbone with my nose as i burrow into his neck.
like his faint taste of tobacco and whiskey.
like the smell of his workshirt when he gets to come home to me.
like rough and tumble play,
like the small noises he makes when i touch him ever so gently.
like feeling completely safe with him, always.
like wanting to be there,
be faithful.
make love,
Make it last.
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Copyright 2013 FindAgentX
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On Monday, November 18, 2013, Numbers Peppelini
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wrote:
Although I would have preferred your work came through you and wasn't about you, it is one of the better writes I've come across ...poignant use of words that titillate all my five senses
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A former member wrote:
It's a grungy love, realistic and down to earth. optimistic, almost, for the future and retaining fond memories. I can almost smell the smoke and the sweat lingering on his shirt. very nicely done.
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A former member wrote:
so lovely...being in a good relationship is one of the best things there is...i really liked this poem a lot, wish you both love and happiness, write on
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On Tuesday, July 9, 2013, FindAgentX
(31) wrote:
thank you! so far he's been a great muse! I wasn't really able to write for a long while.
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A former member wrote:
you are very welcome :) feels like your breath is back in a way, when the words come back
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