Comments by All Members
- "truelly emotional and powerful write,some really great lines in this and a lingering empty feeling projects itself "
Posted by Anth on "Shambles" by Lord Kalgalath
- "_i like the ammount of detail in this piece...and happy endings are so few and far inbetween at DP...it's a shame that you have to die in order to get a little peace in life...well done."
Posted by suicideseason on "the end of a life" by Lord Kalgalath
- "This is nothing against you, Alacer. Honestly, it was only something I think about day in and day out. If someone can prove me wrong, please do. =-MO-="
Posted by Unknown on "the end of a life" by Lord Kalgalath
- "How do we know there's life after death? How every ending there is a bginning. I have yet to see proof yet. Fact, not just what the bible says."
Posted by Unknown on "the end of a life" by Lord Kalgalath
- "The flawlessness that most seek is found in what most people don't see as a flaw...wonderfully done."
Posted by Rebirth on "Flawed" by Lord Kalgalath
- "Hmm methinks it's a metaphor for killing one life in order to change, like a caterpillar metmophosing into a butterfly. But that's just my take on things, Great write."
Posted by Rebirth on "the end of a life" by Lord Kalgalath
- "wow...I love the harmony in this..."away we fly, graceful together" WONDERFUL WRITE. LOVE IT~GoNe~"
Posted by Cwn Annwn on "Wings" by Lord Kalgalath
- "The third last stanza and second last are my favourite. It is an improvement Engel. Well done. =-MO-="
Posted by Unknown on "Wings" by Lord Kalgalath
- "ahh.. darkness at its lonliest... tradgic, or beautiful, depends how you look at it.. lovely write.. ~blue"
Posted by Bluegoddess on "Flawed" by Lord Kalgalath
- "I think that expereincing the worse, hightens the senses when feelings the best...there for giving us something so many won't ever have. This is so very reflective. ~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Shadows in the night" by Lord Kalgalath
- "well, everyone is flawed, and there is truly nothing we may do about it except focus on our strengths and have friends that boost you up...sorry, My squirrel arms aren't quite big enough to lift you up though...lol"
Posted by BleedSilver on "Flawed" by Lord Kalgalath
[Next]
