Mein Gott

By Lord Kalgalath

I used to be one of his sheep
I once sang to him
long ago i went to his home...
But its empty,and always has been

I prayed to him
and he turned his back on me
they called me a betrayer of faith,
i call them a flock of blind fools
their 'miracles' a sham

their book
full of empty words meant to enslave
cover to cover
a pack of lies and deceit

you call yourself christian
i call you a hypocrite
you shun me for my beliefs
when your own dictate acceptance of all

i used to be one of his sheep
i used to follow his rules
now i am a wolf
and its time for some hunting

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Copyright 2004 Bestrafer Engel
Published on Tuesday, March 9, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Ahhh, this is all too familiar for me. My struggle is hell bent on being black and white. I sure as hell am a 'wolf' now though, for the time being. Solid write. :)

  • cemetarydance On Thursday, March 30, 2006, cemetarydance (21)By person wrote:

    lovely.wonderbarr!

  • Malice In Wonderland On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    heh, I can't speak enough about this, so I'll end it here. Good Job. Scholar

  • Angst Queen On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    ::smirks:: well you've hit my views perfectly on this. i'm not a sheep either, let the wolves roam

  • Atalanta On Friday, September 3, 2004, Atalanta (37)By person wrote:

    Sehr gut meine freundin. Meine deutsch ist nicht so gut, aber Meine Vampiric Liebe's ist.

  • Cwn Annwn On Thursday, June 24, 2004, Cwn Annwn (89)By person wrote:

    Awsome comparison "now I am a wolf and its time for some hunting."~GoNe~

  • Midnight Shadow On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, Midnight Shadow (67)By person wrote:

    Ooh...this seems all too familiar. I love it, a sense of truth with a little bit of mischief at the end. Great write. ~Tracy

  • Alacer_Cogitatus On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (140)By person wrote:

    sehr gut. ich werde mehr von dir lesen. Rammstein ist eine gutes gruppe. jawohl fuer dich! A_C

  • A former member wrote: Haha, love it. I can definately relate. Nice job. =-MO-=

  • The Fallen Angel On Saturday, March 13, 2004, The Fallen Angel (234)By person wrote:

    love Rammestein, i like your German titles, which add a stronger emphasis in a strange way...a word of advice to you...when wandering astray know your destination, do not wander aimlessly like a blind angel+fallen one+ [

  • OLd SouL On Friday, March 12, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    A wolf or just a sheep lost from its herd.. or perhaps just wandering aimlessly. I think I am just a sheep wandering. One day I'll find the fields that fulfill me... I hope. Great write! :::OLd

  • A former member wrote: Heh it was rebellious, but it showed definite strength and courage and talent. And I like that. Good write. ~Wish Upon A Star

  • A former member wrote: Rebellious. Christians aren't bad people they just have different outrageous believes than you or I do.. +T.P.U+

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