Comments by All Members
- "Very well done. With a short poem, you must choose every word judiciously, because every inconstancy is magnified. And, here, you did so superbly.
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Posted by Stranger on "Pyromaniac" by Mistress Morbid
- "Vividly it flows from colorful fantasy to hardened reality. Like the sadness of waking from a dream that you wish had been real.
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Posted by Stranger on "Tranquil Skys" by Mistress Morbid
- "I just wrote it too. I was desperatly wanting to go sit in a coffee shop and have a drink today, but its too late :( So I wrote a poem instead. Thank you for your kind words."
Posted by Mistress Morbid on "Flow" by Mistress Morbid
- "i really enjoyed this (if 'enjoyed is the right term) ..i could picture the whole thing easily, and i like the theme of it too. :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "Flow" by Mistress Morbid
- "Fire is to be respected as well as the dead. If you mess with either you should expect the consiquences. The flame controls you, you do not control the fire. Wonderful work.~Necro(Justin)"
Posted by Necromancer on "Pyromaniac" by Mistress Morbid
- "I don't know, but I saw it as the pain was a lot, and God took your hand and led you to heaven after your death. Either way, nicely done."
Posted by Six-Out on "I bid you adieu" by Mistress Morbid
- "_25 words,boys and girls...this is minimalism as it was meant to be...this was fucking powerful.and intense and kinda twisted...which i like.25 words,boys and girls...wow.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Goodbye" by Mistress Morbid
- "_drowning in my blood...i wasn't ready for that...what an interesting...nay,appealing visual...for me,anyway.thank you.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Blinded" by Mistress Morbid
