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  • "ooh, I do love this so...very sexy...i do believe this will become one of my favorites :) fantastic piece, simple but effective...brava, yet again"
    Posted by hate_doll on "Princess of Drudge" by Mistress Morbid
  • "this painted the loveliest picture in my head, I couldn't help but smile for the sheer romance of it. I'm excited to read your other works...brava"
    Posted by hate_doll on "Sleeping Beauty" by Mistress Morbid
  • "This was very whimsical and beautiful.. I have a suggestion though... Around the middle of the poem, you started off two verses with the word Suddenly. Try not to use the same word repeatedly. Other than that small thing, I thought this was great :) :::OL"
    Posted by OLd SouL on "Sleeping Beauty" by Mistress Morbid
  • "o the ending was very romantic. i wish someone would put their arms around my torso and ask me to run away with them. :)this was very beautiful indeed"
    Posted by Twilight on "Sleeping Beauty" by Mistress Morbid
  • "im so sorry but the word snooty has me cracking up right now...i cant make any noise though because my friend is sleeping but im dying inside.lol"
    Posted by Twilight on "Blinded" by Mistress Morbid
  • "Yeah and I loved the way it was broken up with the little variations on "..My ink still flows.." etc. blended in with snatches of everyday life. Wonderful writing, and from a brilliant idea. ~Wish Upon A Star"
    Posted by Unknown on "Flow" by Mistress Morbid
  • "Such a lovely description of the scene, created some beautiful images. And what a pretty ending! Stunning writing. ~Wish Upon A Star"
    Posted by Unknown on "Tranquil Skys" by Mistress Morbid
  • "Ooh something about this really stressed me out, and made me fall in love with it at the same time! It starts off with a feeling of helplessness.. but ended on a note of bravery. Wow, well done! ~Wish Upon A Star"
    Posted by Unknown on "Corrupted Intellect" by Mistress Morbid
  • "Very quick indeed. I think many of us have had this flash of emotion at one time or another. I like how the single thought is given just enough character."
    Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Goodbye" by Mistress Morbid
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