Comments by All Members
- "i really like this piece how it goes from sweet and happy than transitions into something very dramatic i especially like "when you look into my eyes dead,dark,black can you sleep at night" its like look what youve created can you sleep knowing youve made"
Posted by Unknown on "My eyes" by LovedByAMiracle
- "its so interesting how this is expressed how focusing on your beauty is numbing yourself instead of trying to fix the problem which will make you worse very cool piece"
Posted by Unknown on "Eyeliner Stains" by LovedByAMiracle
- "this is awesome i like the part a whole lot whats wrong with the world when death rings your doorbell and you greet it with open arms? its like whats become of this world when people just want to die brilliant "
Posted by Unknown on "The Beginning of Insanity" by LovedByAMiracle
- "i dont know i really took a lot of time reading this and a lot of your poems it wasnt so easy to figure out your poems have a lot of depth very rewarding"
Posted by Unknown on "Unknown Lust" by LovedByAMiracle
- "the end i would like to add is very thought provoking im guessing either these two things its better to cry out and where people can see you and get help or its better to cry for other peoples losses so you can get away from yourself could be wrong"
Posted by Unknown on "What Lies Beneath" by LovedByAMiracle
- "awesome job of taking something really simple like eyeliner and making it like, serve to elucidate so much. Eh... i don't know if that statement made sense. I'm over tired :) but i dig it."
Posted by Unknown on "Eyeliner Stains" by LovedByAMiracle
- "i could be way off but im guessing this poem is surreal indeed but maybe a person that once loved you regardless of how much they hurt you you still want them badly again i might be way off but great poem "
Posted by Unknown on "Unknown Lust" by LovedByAMiracle
- "beautiful imagery, "blood red dusk", "dusty orange" somehow this provokes a feeling of heat. couldn't say that my head fathomed it to the last, but just to travel through the wordss and images was somehow pleasant. and again, you have a way with words, de"
Posted by Daemonicus on "Feeling Your Desperation" by LovedByAMiracle
- "gee.... you know what? you're good. you write here with depth, provoking thoughts of something simple. i really appreciate your delicate, deliberate use of words here. nice one."
Posted by Daemonicus on "Eyeliner Stains" by LovedByAMiracle
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