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Eyeliner Stains
By LovedByAMiracle
Eyeliner stains...
shields a naked soul
hides the brutal murder inside
brightens the ebony
conceals hidden scars
blurs visions of insight
that may have led to an actual emotion
somewhere in the vastness.
Eyeliner...
lets you cry unnoticed
brings beauty to innate revultion
hacking away at an already dead being.
provides an entrance
to the extacence needed to distract
from a crumbling dystopia
of internal mutilation.
Eyeliner...
coated thicker each time
masquerades even deeper
that which is already hidden.
enhances the vortex of malice,
self inflicted.
it stains openly
when a state of lifelessness
is empowered to dwell
Eyeliner...
an undamaging addiction?
...unless it stains
no removal for the black lines
distorting spirits of devotion
unleashed inside.
taking part in a massacre
by unknowing intentions
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Copyright 2004 LovedByAMiracle
Published on Friday, February 13, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Eyeliner Stains"
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A former member wrote:
such force of analysis... of opening up something so commonplace into something universally known, but uniquely recalled.... like looking through a lipstick tube at a life of missed kisses..... maybe.... powerful, intense....
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A former member wrote:
I can only sit in awe with agreement
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On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335)
wrote:
wow, the wonders from my favorite must-have make-up, the eye liner... amazing & very creative, well-done. -MeL-
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A former member wrote:
Loved, you're so beautiful and cute and the best! The way you created this gem out of something so ordinary like eyeliner... Wow, talent! ~Wish Upon A Star
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On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
This is a clever piece...layered meanings expressed very well. I very much enjoyed this! FF
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On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
funny how so much can come of something so little, hehe. nice use of symbolism in this write.
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On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
the more I read the more you impress me+Fallen One+
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A former member wrote:
fabulous job on this one. i just loved reading it. u definitely have a vast amount of talent within you. =)
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A former member wrote:
its so interesting how this is expressed how focusing on your beauty is numbing yourself instead of trying to fix the problem which will make you worse very cool piece
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A former member wrote:
awesome job of taking something really simple like eyeliner and making it like, serve to elucidate so much. Eh... i don't know if that statement made sense. I'm over tired :) but i dig it.
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On Sunday, February 15, 2004, Lemons
(46) wrote:
Wonderful. Awesome. And other positive adjectives.
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A former member wrote:
amazing very awesome very heartfelt
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A former member wrote:
hey- i really like your poetry as well. you have a lot of talent too
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A former member wrote:
when alice cooper's eyeliner runs, its the coolest.
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A former member wrote:
Very deep and I like it alot
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