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My eyes
By LovedByAMiracle
Look into my eyes
beautiful, insightful, bright
bright for you
See the passion in my eyes
erotic, lascivious, desirous
desirous for you
See our love in my eyes
adoration, obcession, ecstasy
ecstasy for you
See my heart in my eyes
dying, breaking, bleeding
bleeding for you
See the hurt in my eyes
anguish, despair, mourning
mourning for you
see what you've taken away from my eyes
hope, ambition, purity
murdered by you
when you look into my eyes
dead, dark, blank
can you sleep at night?
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Copyright 2004 LovedByAMiracle
Published on Saturday, January 24, 2004.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "My eyes"
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A former member wrote:
why is it when we long for love and it is presented, and one is layed onto the table, it is no longer love but lust...repelling that which is most needed in life, and never to be had
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A former member wrote:
i really like this piece how it goes from sweet and happy than transitions into something very dramatic i especially like "when you look into my eyes dead,dark,black can you sleep at night" its like look what youve created can you sleep knowing youve made
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A former member wrote:
Mmm I love eyes.. Very disturbing. I love the ending of it. ~Wish Upon A Star
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On Saturday, January 24, 2004, Kinkypoptart
(555)
wrote:
wow, that just might give me nightmares... i dont think im gonna be able to sleep tonite. lol. ~*~Tart~*~
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On Saturday, January 24, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
The ending is very powerful!
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A former member wrote:
WOW very deep!!!!!
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