The Beginning of Insanity

By LovedByAMiracle

You think nothing of it
when the birds sing out of key
The suns rays turn black
and the gray clouds rain fire.
The eclipse burns away
the ground beneath your feet.
A man in the distance with an eerie aura
who doesnt belong.
A bird drops dead in the sky
falling to the miserable ground
that we call home.
Your heart finally jumps out of you,
Tangling with the morbid branches
of the weeping willow
that you call your soul.
The sun starts to slowly bleed
the same red tears that fall from your eyes.
Whats wrong with the world
when death rings your doorbell
and you greet it with open arms?
Give the devil a kiss
and walk through the gates of hell

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Copyright 2004 LovedByAMiracle
Published on Monday, January 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • BleedSilver On Friday, May 21, 2004, BleedSilver (298)By person wrote:

    Walk through the gates of hell...that was my fave line. I liked this one. ~Mikey

  • A former member wrote: this is awesome i like the part a whole lot whats wrong with the world when death rings your doorbell and you greet it with open arms? its like whats become of this world when people just want to die brilliant

  • yslehc On Monday, January 26, 2004, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    wow cool write.. all of it except the ending reminded me of a movie called "the seventh sign".. dont know if you've ever seen it but its pretty weird..... nice write

  • Drea On Monday, January 26, 2004, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    this is interesting... i liked it. ~Drea~

  • A former member wrote: A bird drops dead in the sky falling to the miserable ground thats so awsome i really like this piece

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