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Unknown Lust
By LovedByAMiracle
(im not sure about this one, i was high on my thoughts)
Tainted Scars
Explosion
because thats what love does
Eyes talk with a silent lust
waiting for more
Bleed black
Desire
so you can be mine
Their hands hover over us
a dark shadow
Bloodshot skies
Slits
your imaginary touch is electric
The clouds pull me in
eating me away
Scarlet hearts
Chained
addicting tradgedies that begin to kill
A special knowing enlightens all
Bound by reality
Red tears
Murder
because thats what life does
Your eyes let me down
needing you now
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Copyright 2004 LovedByAMiracle
Published on Sunday, January 25, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Unknown Lust"
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On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335)
wrote:
beautiful & talented write from beginning to end... wow. -MeL-
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A former member wrote:
i dont know i really took a lot of time reading this and a lot of your poems it wasnt so easy to figure out your poems have a lot of depth very rewarding
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A former member wrote:
i could be way off but im guessing this poem is surreal indeed but maybe a person that once loved you regardless of how much they hurt you you still want them badly again i might be way off but great poem
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On Saturday, February 14, 2004, LovedByAMiracle
(51) wrote:
*is freaked out* you're right on. how could you know something like that?
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On Monday, January 26, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
interesting.. this could use a little more spice.. but it was a good meal. :o)
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On Monday, January 26, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
i love this one too "bloodshot skies slits..." love this stanza...your poems convey a maturity well beyond your years
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On Monday, January 26, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
sorry i dont know your age...i got youu confsed with another poet who said on their page they were 17....sorry again....how old are you
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On Monday, January 26, 2004, LovedByAMiracle
(51) wrote:
im only 14, yes much younger than 17.
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A former member wrote:
I know what you mean about getting high off your own thoughts.. Very much like the poem, especially the way each stanza begins. ~Wish Upon A Star
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