Feeling Your Desperation
By LovedByAMiracle
A hopeless aspiration
for the sky to crumble upon me
To absorb and bask in the dust
from a fatal heart decaying.
Crushing the abstract distortions
growing with a poignant uncertaintly
faced within your despret eyes.
Gloating in the light
of an emotional armageddon
Halted by the glistening
of a dawning tomorrow
turning from a blood red dusk
to a dusty orange
plagued with placidity.
feel the makings of an emotional flight
into words unsaid
known only by endeering stargazing
into a dialated deadness lurking above.
A creeping unyeielding light
infesting and twisting within
made aparent by sultry lips
to a longing despret utopia
felt from heart to heart.
knowing the tireless ruins
of a placid melodic breeze
away they will be swept
into a solicitous but daring venture
parallel to tomorrow
Comments on "Feeling Your Desperation"
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A former member wrote:
There is something buried in your work that I can dig out and relate to, You have such a magnificent honesty and a subtle yet overpowering strength in words.
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On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
such a peaceful quest...very talented piece+Fallen One+
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A former member wrote:
I dig... gorgeous... and you used glisten in it. I'm obsessed with that word. It makes me happy.
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A former member wrote:
*lick* You have done it again, my dear. This is beautiful. ~Wish Upon A Star