Feeling Your Desperation

By LovedByAMiracle

A hopeless aspiration

for the sky to crumble upon me

To absorb and bask in the dust

from a fatal heart decaying.


Crushing the abstract distortions

growing with a poignant uncertaintly

faced within your despret eyes.


Gloating in the light

of an emotional armageddon

Halted by the glistening

of a dawning tomorrow

turning from a blood red dusk

to a dusty orange


plagued with placidity.


feel the makings of an emotional flight

into words unsaid

known only by endeering stargazing

into a dialated deadness lurking above.


A creeping unyeielding light

infesting and twisting within

made aparent by sultry lips

to a longing despret utopia


felt from heart to heart.


knowing the tireless ruins

of a placid melodic breeze

away they will be swept

into a solicitous but daring venture

parallel to tomorrow

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Copyright 2004 LovedByAMiracle
Published on Tuesday, February 10, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: There is something buried in your work that I can dig out and relate to, You have such a magnificent honesty and a subtle yet overpowering strength in words.

  • The Fallen Angel On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, The Fallen Angel (235)By person wrote:

    such a peaceful quest...very talented piece+Fallen One+

  • A former member wrote: I dig... gorgeous... and you used glisten in it. I'm obsessed with that word. It makes me happy.

  • A former member wrote: *lick* You have done it again, my dear. This is beautiful. ~Wish Upon A Star

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