Comments by All Members
- ""I toss a rose onto the ground by your feet
Sensing the feeling of remorse and defeat
Memories full of laughter and some of doubt
Others of sadness from when you would shout" I realy realy loved that stanza. Some good stuff here. But for me that stanza holds alot, and its flow is perfect."
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "In the woods" by myscreamsilenced
- ""The one thing i find comforting though is the fact i can just leave. i will no longer have to try." I can seriously say that I've been there in those dark thoughts. Intense poem. "
Posted by Nameless Pariah on "what i want" by myscreamsilenced
- "A vivid piece, but I must be honest when I say I think the main character is a coward. I like the style and images you used here. You weren't trying to be vague, nor artsy about it. Nice and clear."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Too Late" by myscreamsilenced
- "I like how you use lower case "i's" to represent yourself...great writers use little thigs like this to get their point across...another good one...**jwd**"
Posted by Petrified Wood on "what i want" by myscreamsilenced
- "Once again...true feeling...I have only read a few of your works, but I am going to add you to my favorites list, because your style is great and I can relate to you...thank you...**jwd**"
Posted by Petrified Wood on "Death" by myscreamsilenced
- "this is good.... reminds me of my life.... i really like the way you put this piece together...~hopeless"
Posted by hopeless on "Suffer" by myscreamsilenced
- "wow... this is good i loved the way it flowed.... i would say something but im not gonna... keep up the good work~hopeless"
Posted by hopeless on "Death" by myscreamsilenced
- "Shit man, this is a nice write, I wasnt sure where it was going at first but very nicley done, thanks for posting, yay! "
Posted by Unknown on "In the woods" by myscreamsilenced
- "I agree, great ending... it really is hard to live in a world that won't listen to what you have to say - or, when it does listen, doesn't seem to care. It's even harder when you can't run away. Poetry's a good release..."
Posted by stormtalk on "Angry Shouting" by myscreamsilenced
- "heartfelt emotions for sure.. rely a nice write.. I do wish to come to never never land. cous I showed my worl to others and they agree with me.. *looks like he just said something realy cleaver* nice write .. Monkey"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Angry Shouting" by myscreamsilenced
- "I like your poem very much, for I think it shows the ugliness that people don't want to see inside themselves. Maybe I got it wrong, who knows. Nice job. "
Posted by Unknown on "Dissapointments" by myscreamsilenced
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