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"A wisp of universal truth that is as plain as the nose on the face but many choose not to see."
Posted by tonebone on "(as) lovers" by cut dagger cut

"Nice and dark. Just the way it should be. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "bullets and bloody butterflies" by cut dagger cut

"Great old fashioned ide to the joys of cold blooded acts."
Posted by Spiral Downward on "bullets and bloody butterflies" by cut dagger cut

"an outcry for help.... so torturous a piece..well done. if ever u need someone to talk to.. please don't hesitate to ask."
Posted by natalie on "growing tired." by cut dagger cut

" "do you want death?"..lmao...its the poison bodily fluid..deaths cums I guess...such outrageous words here..very.uhm..shockingly honest..absurd..different...yeah..ponders for short moment..leaves.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "no title..." by cut dagger cut

"Why are people quoting..oh cause this write was hauntingly good ,"you created a winter in this rib cage that will never end."..thats a very chilling,cold hearted way to express the cavity that is the ribcage when hate swarms in it like a fire and extinguishes everything that becomes ashes..how vividly tasty..the flesh rather..what is ..hanging from a hook..like a cow..ready to eaten..but us a dream you say..good that you walked away.. wouldn't want to have her on my dinner plate..or would I ."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "dismantled, my dear." by cut dagger cut

"wow. that was epic! loved everything about it! great write! "
Posted by Unknown on "everything will be alright..." by cut dagger cut

"Brutal Imagery, desperation, and hopelessness, all rolled into one maleficent word-picture. I like."
Posted by Scarrzz on "natul tortuosa" by cut dagger cut

"I will read this over and over and I am sure it will always have a chilling emotional draw. Lovely."
Posted by Mylissa on "dismantled, my dear." by cut dagger cut

""I dreamt about you dangling from your back off a hook". You got to me from the very 1st line !!! Dark and beautiful !! Thank you !!"
Posted by Dark Valkyrie on "dismantled, my dear." by cut dagger cut

""in this rib cage" feels hollow...i love your choice of words...so dark and to the point like getting hit in the stomach...i loved it"
Posted by DarkBlueClearWater on "dismantled, my dear." by cut dagger cut

"'I watched you cry and beg, and there was nothing I would do. more than just an attempt to get to you,'..... absolutely love that line. definitely rouses the poetic hackles:)"
Posted by elisa on "dismantled, my dear." by cut dagger cut

"*whistles appreciatively*"
Posted by whisperer on "no title..." by cut dagger cut

"really liked this... great write:)"
Posted by italianbella on "everything will be alright..." by cut dagger cut

""liars shouldnt swear", lovely line. -kitty"
Posted by Sticky Kitty on "if only broken promises were forbidden" by cut dagger cut

"so powerful. great write. this one will go in my journal because it really nails some pain i feel. ty for sharing"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "if only broken promises were forbidden" by cut dagger cut

"Great write. i'd rather kill you. Great. ~*~Tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "her murderous help" by cut dagger cut

"Kinda scary. Great write though ~*~Tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "the killing of a goddess" by cut dagger cut

"ha, great. ~*~TarT~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "no title..." by cut dagger cut

"i love the ending..and the repeating of certain lines made the feel of this pretty intense. i like it...awesome write."
Posted by Twilight on "excuses.poisons.death." by cut dagger cut

"so very well put up in emotion"
Posted by darkvamptress on "the killing of a goddess" by cut dagger cut

"the rhythm of the last stanza tied the entire piece into an excellent end... very well put together piece"
Posted by Jonas on "kiss leaves blood stained" by cut dagger cut

"This is very interensting and unique. I havent seen one like it. Good write! ~Ameythyst Raine~"
Posted by Unknown on "kiss leaves blood stained" by cut dagger cut

"Holy shit.. i am still speechless... ~wicked~"
Posted by Unknown on "bullets and bloody butterflies" by cut dagger cut

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