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kiss leaves blood stained
By cut dagger cut
she can't slit herself
so she just makes up herself
her fascination is red
like on her lips
like our blood
she won't admit she hates herself
but vomits every night into obvious doubts
the doubts in her eyes
the stench in her kiss
the promise of life
the weakening of her grip
her fascination is red
like on her lips
like her blood
the stains left on her heart
give her reasons to doubt and slit
the stains are what causd her fascination with red lips
it's obvious
she doesn't wear red on her lips
but with the glitter of her mouth
and the shade of her skin and eyes
she sees a shade of shit
but doesnt admit she wants to die
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Copyright 2003 cut dagger cut
Published on Tuesday, December 9, 2003.
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, Jonas
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wrote:
the rhythm of the last stanza tied the entire piece into an excellent end... very well put together piece
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A former member wrote:
This is very interensting and unique. I havent seen one like it. Good write! ~Ameythyst Raine~
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On Sunday, February 22, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
has an obvious logic path all it's own - very unique ... this is great ... thanks ... funguy
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A former member wrote:
A girl who hides behind things to veil herself from the truth.. Very interesting.. Very good. ~Wish
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On Thursday, December 11, 2003, hopeless
(51) wrote:
very interesting..... i loved it! lol its a very vivid piece.... good write.. ~hopeless
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