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the killing of a goddess
By cut dagger cut
she looks so lovely in red
with the dagger in her heart
and her skin torn apart
she looks beautiful with her mouth open,
the face she made, gasping for air
with her eyes into mine, she stared.
she is my everything
forever i had to prove
even if killing her was my move
she looks so lovely in red
with my dagger in her heart
and her world torn apart.
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Copyright 2003 cut dagger cut
Published on Sunday, December 7, 2003.
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A former member wrote:
wow
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On Sunday, August 21, 2005, Serenity
(469)
wrote:
Truly lovely.
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On Monday, May 9, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Kinda scary. Great write though ~*~Tart~*~
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On Tuesday, April 20, 2004, darkvamptress
(16) wrote:
so very well put up in emotion
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On Thursday, January 29, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
this is beautifully violent...like the end. FF
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A former member wrote:
Hey, this is brilliant. It really fascinates me. Beauty in death - very true. ~Wish Upon A Star
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On Sunday, December 7, 2003, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Nice job. Welcome to DP.
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On Sunday, December 7, 2003, Drifter
(265) wrote:
i wont sA chk spwellin, cuz i do it 2. I like this. Good write
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