the killing of a goddess

By cut dagger cut

she looks so lovely in red
with the dagger in her heart
and her skin torn apart

she looks beautiful with her mouth open,
the face she made, gasping for air
with her eyes into mine, she stared.

she is my everything
forever i had to prove
even if killing her was my move

she looks so lovely in red
with my dagger in her heart
and her world torn apart.

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Copyright 2003 cut dagger cut
Published on Sunday, December 7, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: wow

  • Serenity On Sunday, August 21, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Truly lovely.

  • Kinkypoptart On Monday, May 9, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Kinda scary. Great write though ~*~Tart~*~

  • darkvamptress On Tuesday, April 20, 2004, darkvamptress (16)By person wrote:

    so very well put up in emotion

  • flying_fox On Thursday, January 29, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    this is beautifully violent...like the end. FF

  • A former member wrote: Hey, this is brilliant. It really fascinates me. Beauty in death - very true. ~Wish Upon A Star

  • Alanarchy On Sunday, December 7, 2003, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    Nice job. Welcome to DP.

  • Drifter On Sunday, December 7, 2003, Drifter (268)By person wrote:

    i wont sA chk spwellin, cuz i do it 2. I like this. Good write

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