everything will be alright...

By cut dagger cut

leave your pride in the garden
leave your heart in your grave
we are the fallen
and you are the dead
fucking monster

we are dead

if i didn't care, and i'll admit i don't
would you cry?
keep the gun in your hand
just one moment...

the clips are empty
and i did that on purpose
i want to be the one to fucking kill you

is your mind empty?
and i really want you to do this
because i dont want stains of memories
on my walls after you're gone.

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Copyright 2003 cut dagger cut
Published on Tuesday, December 9, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: wow. that was epic! loved everything about it! great write!

  • italianbella On Friday, December 28, 2007, italianbella (183)By person wrote:

    really liked this... great write:)

  • A former member wrote: good job. great job.

  • flying_fox On Thursday, January 29, 2004, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    wow. This is great. Totally agree with Capt funguy and Foxxxy. FF

  • capt_funguy On Wednesday, January 28, 2004, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    dude ,,,, that last stanza - oh man ... freakin' genius .... getting a charge out of the rest of your work , but had to stop for that one - funguy

  • maddin foxxxy On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    "i dont want stains of memories on my walls after you're gone".....the marks of the past....reality hits here....well done.

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