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dismantled, my dear.
By cut dagger cut
I dreamt about you dangling from your back off a hook.
and there was
nothing I could do...
probably cause id rather not.
I watched
you cry and beg, and there was nothing I would do.
more than just
an attempt to get to you,
this is for everything you've put in me
and ripped away.
this is for the things you won't admit
and those
filthy fucking lips.
filth spoken from filth.
swing of
the axe to your flesh torn off,
as you just fell and stuck to the
stake.
rather just walk away.
im cold now.
you created
a winter in this rib cage that will never end.
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Copyright 2010 cut dagger cut
Published on Wednesday, July 28, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
this was probably written about a year ago.Comments on "dismantled, my dear."
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(343)
wrote:
Why are people quoting..oh cause this write was hauntingly good ,"you created a winter in this rib cage that will never end."..thats a very chilling,cold hearted way to express the cavity that is the ribcage when hate swarms in it like a fire and extinguishes everything that becomes ashes..how vividly tasty..the flesh rather..what is ..hanging from a hook..like a cow..ready to eaten..but us a dream you say..good that you walked away.. wouldn't want to have her on my dinner plate..or would I .
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2010, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
I will read this over and over and I am sure it will always have a chilling emotional draw. Lovely.
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2010, Dark Valkyrie
(11) wrote:
"I dreamt about you dangling from your back off a hook". You got to me from the very 1st line !!! Dark and beautiful !! Thank you !!
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2010, elisa
(1595) wrote:
'I watched you cry and beg, and there was nothing I would do. more than just an attempt to get to you,'..... absolutely love that line. definitely rouses the poetic hackles:)
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