her murderous help

By cut dagger cut

i'm tired of putting my hand to my head
i wish my fingers and palm were a gun
so i can blow the iron to the back of my head
and maybe the sorrow would go with it

she doesnt care how i feel
and if she does
she does the best job showing it

i'm tired of putting my fingers to my wrists
i wish my nails were blades
so i can shred the skin of nothing
and hopefully the sorrow would bleed with it too

she says, "i'm sorry and i wish i could help you."
but she thinks, "i'd rather kill you."

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Copyright 2003 cut dagger cut
Published on Tuesday, December 9, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Kinkypoptart On Tuesday, May 10, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Great write. i'd rather kill you. Great. ~*~Tart~*~

  • capt_funguy On Wednesday, January 28, 2004, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    when she thinks , she thinks blunt ----- another great piece .... funguy

  • Ideas On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, Ideas (50)By person wrote:

    The sorrow can really be felt in this, along with a sense of regret (on your part, not hers).

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