Comments by All Members
- "Even though we could never seem to work things out
I still love you just the same, I do
I miss your smile and that sparkle in your eyes
You're so beautiful, never change!
illiawer at gmail dot com
I hope I'll hear from you, It's been a long time."
Posted by Unknown on "Break of Light" by TornPaperDoll
- "This stung a fleshy spot for me. Sometimes I hesitate indulging such rendezvous for cringing in the thought of having to let go of those moments you cling to so tightly. Thanks for sharing, ~T
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Posted by Mistress Shadow on "Break of Light" by TornPaperDoll
- "i'm back here reading this and i find that i have found more to it than i did the first time i came...this is...it's extremely beatiful...ionno, i just understand better..even maybe more than what i would like to"
Posted by Unknown on "She Holds Out Her Heart" by TornPaperDoll
- "Wow, Amanda. Another masterpiece. You always seem to catch the exact feelings and emotions in what you are writing with the words you choose. Another awesome post. Great Job! ~Josh~"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "Sans" by TornPaperDoll
- "something delicate and soul-smooth from the heart, how do we live with all the irreplaceables in life? just hang on one day at a time.. very nice."
Posted by Unknown on "Sans" by TornPaperDoll
- "I agree with you on this Amanda, no matter how well someone else does, it always pays to be your self, you have done it again with this one, another amazing display of your untouchable talent. Grat job. ~Josh~"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "Yeah, She Might..." by TornPaperDoll
- "Wow, such a powerful piece, filled with emotions, anger, and slight regret. You always have such a way with words that you make your works come to life right before the readers eyes. Bravo Amanda. ~Josh~"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "Mother..." by TornPaperDoll
- "This is such a tragic tale full of tragedy, pain, and pure emotions full of sorrow, so sad yet you captured this so well Amanda. Great job as always. So much talent is displayed here. ~Josh~"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "Love for Her" by TornPaperDoll
- "A very tragic and painful display of what so many of us go through, the one we have always loved or the one who we know we would love even more? such a hard decision to make. A love we know will always be there, or a love we have no idea as to how long it"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "Between Us" by TornPaperDoll
- "... this has a good rythm to it and i like the words you had in it.. it suits the title well in my opinion.. good write"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Mother..." by TornPaperDoll
- "man does this poem remind me of myself.. you got an awesome write here, and i loved it... this was just, you spoke it.. you know you.. and thats cool.. dp mail me sometime if you can.
Rose"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Yeah, She Might..." by TornPaperDoll
- "The first thing I thought was "Superhero you, superhero me" Forgoet where it's from though. This was a sweet, great piece. Good job."
Posted by Six-Out on "Superhero You" by TornPaperDoll
- "I love this. I can relate so well. The words are direct but without losing the meaning. It has a sharp impact."
Posted by Kaja on "Mother..." by TornPaperDoll
- "this is rain-soaked with the sorrows of solitude and Im sorry to har it I gues nothing can be tken for granted in this life including being able to settle down and find love. This poem expertly highlights that - best wishes Hatter Man!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Love for Her" by TornPaperDoll
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