Comments by All Members
- "Thanks kinki - I never really know if the message is heard - it's nice to find one that seems to do that."
Posted by Pryzm on "Wedding Night" by Pryzm
- "sounds like a wonderful evening, I particularly like ' A mandolin tunes the twilight' ... "
Posted by kinkifrog on "Wedding Night" by Pryzm
- "Neither of mine where either - although the second one was close. Maybe three is a charm."
Posted by Pryzm on "Wedding Night" by Pryzm
- "Aww this is a beautiful romantic image... Although, my wedding night was nowhere near to this lol "
Posted by MissAngelic on "Wedding Night" by Pryzm
- "wow this is epic! it made me feel so alone like it was calling to me only. melancholy and beautiful"
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Heartbreak" by Pryzm
- ""empty and cold holds no truth to the pain of a dying heart" That line really stuck out to me.. This piece grabbed me by the heart and made me feel the pain. heartbreak is a bitch i'd rather live without. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Heartbreak" by Pryzm
- "the one i heard was "jack and jill both went up the hill with a quarter
jack came down with a silly grin, and jill came down with 50 cents""
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Jack" by Pryzm
- "wow this is outstanding and I am honored to read such a wonderful pen. I am surprised others haven't caught on to your genius"
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "White" by Pryzm
- "She isn't lucky yet (nor am I) but I'm slowly working on it. ;-) Thank you natalie..."
Posted by Pryzm on "Etch" by Pryzm
- "i love writes about insanity, and it seems as though the white padded room and institutionalization might just make it worse thanks for giving me something to think on"
Posted by Unknown on "White" by Pryzm
- "a simple valentine's wish with a lovely message. :) lucky individual!"
Posted by natalie on "Etch" by Pryzm
- "there is so much truth in this simple piece; but there are times when certain words can cause more destruction when uttered, than when kept inside.
well put together."
Posted by natalie on "Unsaid Words" by Pryzm
- "What a creative whimsical piece of art you have penned lovely simply lovely"
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Etch" by Pryzm
- "a deep outpouring of pain that most can probably
identify with. really well put together! thanks for sharing. "
Posted by natalie on "Tired" by Pryzm
- "An old comedian's joke went something like "Jack and Jill went up the hill and I don't mean after water, 30 minutes later Jack came down, and Jill came down with a quarter"! Thanks for this up date sir and keep writing!"
Posted by dwells on "Jack" by Pryzm
- "Then what happened?.. don't leave me hanging like that mister!!! lol"
Posted by Devilish on "Jack" by Pryzm
- "wow this is so sweet and romantic.... sigh... take me away now please... I am yours :)"
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Horizons" by Pryzm
- "Silence, unspoken words,
It’s not what you don’t say,
It’s what you can’t hear,
It’s how it makes you feel.
this is a clip from a poem I wrote called
"Thight lips sink ships"
Your poem reminded me of it, I love what you wrote, Great write
"
Posted by Electric-Chair on "Unsaid Words" by Pryzm
- "This was do wonderfully put and with the broken construct. The description of how subjective poetry is something that gets forgotten a lot. Good to see you have the right mindset, which is probably why you have a poetic voice that you let be shared. Great write."
Posted by Spiral Downward on "The Point of Poetry..." by Pryzm
- "Your words though simply jump off the page as truth, I am happy to see a new poet to the Valley with your talent and style."
Posted by Alchemist on "Unsaid Words" by Pryzm
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