Tired

By Pryzm

                                                    Of loving

To not be loved.

 

Of being open

To be shut out.

 

Of giving

To be taken.

 

Of being honest

To not be trusted.

 

Of being considerate

To not receive compassion.

 

Of being compassionate

To not be considered.

 

Of being caring

To not be cared.

 

Of being supportive

To be walked on.

 

Of being heartfelt

To not have the heart felt.

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Copyright 2013 Pryzm
Published on Sunday, February 3, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Just Dave On Friday, September 15, 2017, Just Dave (457)By person wrote:

    I've learned that everyone is going to disappoint. It sucks but true. I still put myself out there but????? Well you know.

  • PoetessDarkly On Wednesday, March 27, 2013, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    this ever so lightly pulls at my heartstrings this is so lovely pryzm

  • BetaWolfinVA On Friday, February 8, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    right now... i identify with both sides of this bad situation... very well executed...very tortured too... Scholar

  • Devilish On Friday, February 8, 2013, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Awee.. know the feeling darling. licks. hey you should mail SilentStalker he is the King at hooking up profiles. just look at his and Amaryllis profiles. you would not believe the possibilities and colors and schemes available. much licks . Scholar

  • BlackVelvet Rose On Tuesday, February 5, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose (175)By person wrote:

    God do I know these feelings.... this hits close to home for me thank you for sharing this with us... Scholar

  • Pryzm On Wednesday, February 6, 2013, Pryzm (71)By person wrote:

    Thank you Lilith - I'm glad you liked it...

  • poe_lover28 On Sunday, February 3, 2013, poe_lover28 (164)By person wrote:

    i know how much of these things feel, i love this poem, write on!

  • Pryzm On Tuesday, February 5, 2013, Pryzm (71)By person wrote:

    Oh I will...in fact your name makes me want to post a description of Pryzm. Thank you....stay tuned.

  • A former member wrote: I could have wrote that for myself, well if I had talent maybe, but I don't so thanks for writting it so I can empathize

  • Pryzm On Tuesday, February 5, 2013, Pryzm (71)By person wrote:

    You can write this....have faith. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you.

  • Devilish On Sunday, February 3, 2013, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Damn!!! I have to say this leaves me aching.. painfully beautifully written. hello there you . Scholar

  • Pryzm On Tuesday, February 5, 2013, Pryzm (71)By person wrote:

    "Painfully beautifully written" whoa...I don't know what to say to that! Thank you Devilish....I hope I continue to peak your interest.

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