Comments by All Members
- "These lines struck a nerve with me... why is a question i will be asking myself for a long time..
'Call out my name
Come onto me
& show the world
what it is that you see
before you sacrifice
your soul
to be
everything
you asked
of me'
There is something in those words that i need to feed from to wet my appetite with.... i dunno how else to explain it... i am at a loss for words here...."
Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "@~My Flower Child~@" by Deathkitten
- "Aww *grins* yeah I do tend to throw in sharp objects here & there. The ending always seemed the finest. Thanks Mal :)"
Posted by Deathkitten on "PLAY-TOY" by Deathkitten
- "You and all your stabbing last lines- that's my favorite sort of read.. When the end just feels like a knife; you've mastered this"
Posted by Maladroit on "PLAY-TOY" by Deathkitten
- "Wonderful personification Jess and makes me question now, the ultimate fate of my rubber ducky (I haven't taken a bath in ages) - oh, but lots of showers, cheers! "
Posted by dwells on "PLAY-TOY" by Deathkitten
- "Awe, yes, but then there's that favorite toy that you just can't seem to discard no matter how tattered it gets... :)~ Love this one, kitten* :)~"
Posted by blue angel on "PLAY-TOY" by Deathkitten
- "ah i don't think i could have said it better myself... i have been trying to peep through those blinds but you got them turned the wrong way. fix em and i shall take a lil peeky peek ;)"
Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "(Saturated) " by Deathkitten
- "Instead of going through & replying to every single comment, I will acknowledge everyone who has/will comment(ed). Thank you so much, for reading & commenting/complimenting this piece. You all are awesome :)"
Posted by Deathkitten on "How did it get this far?" by Deathkitten
- "excellent poem jess, this poem flows so well its damn near epic. the content could only be spoken from a person that's been there and your birds eye view of the carnage self harmers go through and where they've been is amazing. its really good and I think maybe this is one of your best due to the beat and flow, its really flawless. nice one jess!"
Posted by haunted on "How did it get this far?" by Deathkitten
- "You remind me of my friend quite a bit. Your poetry is so magnetic. I just joined but I can tell I'm going to love it. You're a great writer!"
Posted by Unknown on "Mortal Maze " by Deathkitten
- "This is so inspiring. The cemetery is like a place to go to catch all the thoughts swimming through your head, but once you enter the cemetery they're all gone. Totally dissipated. I can relate to this. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Field Full of Stone" by Deathkitten
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