Comments by All Members
- "This poem is one of those things you come across in a day, a story, a song, a phrase....which just resides in your head and you are unable to think about anything else...now this happens rarely to me but this poem was stuck in my head for a loooong time and I couldn't get it out of my head, no matter how many BVB songs I listened to, it'd just stick there... "
Posted by Unknown on "Extremophiles" by metaphormachine
- "Heavy enough to feel in the chest & brain, light enough to be one of the funnest poems I've ever read aloud. So bitter, so true. Nice clash here. Your use of the English language contains much wit, razor-sharp. Good stuffs, fella...."
Posted by Unknown on "Extremophiles" by metaphormachine
- "Your writing is very unique & seemingly complicated...after the reader gets into the flow & idea many images begin to take shape. This is true of many of your works. I was really drawn to this one because of the title...I have a serious crush on creatures of the mantid variety. A hot work, this...very humid, tubercle-drip of piercing language. Perhaps it is the dancing & the watching that makes me sweat. Liked this very much. Cool cool cool."
Posted by Unknown on "Mantis" by metaphormachine
- "Restraint, holding back in conflict with her feelings. One part wants to do right by God, one part , like the insect, wants to eat you alive. Who can blame her! ;-) x "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Mantis" by metaphormachine
- "astral traveling through space and time ... searching for synchronicity ... it's not the destination but the journey ... un-sprung navel contemplation , crazy , together ... "
Posted by kinkifrog on "Destination" by metaphormachine
- "Hmm. Your works continue to intrigue me, my friend. You are a master of mind-provoking piece, with small, simple stanzas and poems, no doubt. *Grins*I hope to see more."
Posted by Unknown on "Mantis" by metaphormachine
- "Hmm, interesting! That with the age ... But what is "fae"? I haven't found any translation... Only "fetal alcohol effect". Did you mean this meaning?"
Posted by metaphormachine on "Mantis" by metaphormachine
- "Watching someone change and grow! Fascinated by their sense of wonder of the world. Wanting to get into their head. ........ Another intrueging one M. Clues for us to piece together . X"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Destination" by metaphormachine
- "i found this despairing, devoid of bliss and fulfillment... a sort of que sera sera at the end there. perhaps i have read it differently than you intended because the others seem to think it kinky. oh well. i marvel at your skill all the same."
Posted by Unknown on "Bittersweet Box" by metaphormachine
- "she is disturbing. part fae. part oracle. intriguing, though cryptic. i can feel the age in this, the weariness."
Posted by Unknown on "Mantis" by metaphormachine
- "they bloom all the more sweeter with one to appreciate and nurture them ... a labour of love ... :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Honey" by metaphormachine
- "Almost got this one but then I'm a bit thick at times, and this was indeed a marvellous portrayal with a catchy and irrestible title, flow on!"
Posted by dwells on "Bittersweet Box" by metaphormachine
- "Tired I am still quite often ... that depends entirely on my low blood pressure ... I think. Thanks, I think it's better, dear! :) XO"
Posted by metaphormachine on "Tired" by metaphormachine
- ":) We have in fact now been clarified what my motivation was, right?! I have told you a lot ... via mail, dear ... thank you forever, dear! XOXO :)"
Posted by metaphormachine on "Tired" by metaphormachine
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