Honey

More beautiful than ever!

Honey

sweeter than usual

where you live.

Sunflower fragrance

your breath

is my survival air.

The old momentum

when I imagine

excite your name to hum.

More beautiful than ever

¡Olé!

My rose flourishes

the value of all toil.

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Published on Monday, January 21, 2013. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Poem 8 - Book 7 of 15 - My Word - The Void / God Views - The Void -

Comments on "Honey"

A former member wrote: I like your shards of lines. I like your undeveloped film. it's intrinsic. carnal somehow. following a breeze of thought, of whimsy. plucking one voice from a garden of many. this is just sweet enough.
On Tuesday, February 12, 2013, metaphormachine (133) wrote:

Thanks, dear! You are so precious ... Long live the individuality! :)
On Monday, January 21, 2013, dwells (4285) wrote:

Would like to see more developement if possible, with longer lines to form coherent stanzas. But then that's just me too maybe, keep writing!
On Thursday, January 24, 2013, metaphormachine (133) wrote:

RAEBNC ...