Comments by All Members
- "That first stanza is breathtaking. Then you are reminiscing at how you were so amazed by your first shared trips on the magical train, Reencountered and explored again very vividly . I really enjoyed this. X x "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Baby, Blue Sky" by metaphormachine
- "rethinking the ideas of nearness. we are all underneath the same sky, after all. thrilling and lovely. those last lines sting, like having the breath knocked out of you. thanks for the always pleasurable ride."
Posted by Unknown on "Baby, Blue Sky" by metaphormachine
- "classically beautiful... painted with a knowing hand from memory. i adore the imagery. wow. the lady is blessed to have you and must be quite remarkable to inspire such stilling muse."
Posted by Unknown on "Landing" by metaphormachine
- "i adore dragons. i had a dragon costume when i was a child. this soars with a new brand of freedom. gorgeous and spilling over with brightness. thank you for this."
Posted by Unknown on "Solar Winds" by metaphormachine
- "those moments of epiphany and nirvana that too quickly escape us before we can connect all of the dots... you've described the confusion, the loss well."
Posted by Unknown on "Dozens of Formations" by metaphormachine
- ""The lights, the foreign ship/a cathedral in the sky"... haunting images. this has a lullaby's hum and a ghost story's chill and unwillingness to depart. amazing."
Posted by Unknown on "In the Search" by metaphormachine
- "our wants betray us, imprison us almost as often as they embrace and free us... lust and desire are quite fickle beasts. i like where you went with this. i find myself asking "was it worth it?""
Posted by Unknown on "Even Angels Will Love" by metaphormachine
- "i love the details you chose to share rather than the more obvious ones. it shows a tenderness of heart. both romantic and a bit tragic all at once. this one lingers."
Posted by Unknown on "Angel with Defects" by metaphormachine
- "Reflective, beautiful dark igneous rock likened to incest. A secret . Previous but dark . Dangerous ground, symbolised by the rock. Why rape equal.? Interesting read to piece together. :-)"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Obsidian" by metaphormachine
- "Thanks, my dear! In German are the lines & words "Desire is / a butcher / counsellor" a very great nice wordplay, especially "butcher" has a double meaning. Unfortunately there is in English no word /in a similar or same sense ... ;)
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Posted by metaphormachine on "Even Angels Will Love" by metaphormachine
- "Hmm. Desire, another deadly aspect of life... and it doesn't have to mean sexual desire either. Peculiar, but wonderful, friend. I'll be sure to read more."
Posted by Unknown on "Even Angels Will Love" by metaphormachine
- "How dreamy... Peculiar choice of words and flow (in a good way, mind you). You have quite a gift for giving the reader something to think about."
Posted by Unknown on "Colourful Days Fade" by metaphormachine
- "Ah. Passion and love... Mankind's true self-destruct method. So many wars fought, so much bloodshed, and many traitors created due to earning or maintaining another's affection... Very alluring poem here, friend..."
Posted by Unknown on "Passion" by metaphormachine
- "I enjoyed the simplicity of this eloquent creation.The ease of reading does not subtract from the fullness of the work.I like your name by the way.Very creative! "
Posted by Ortolan on "Sophistications Mirror" by metaphormachine
- "Thank you...you're quite welcome...& no I do not mind, in fact I encourage any criticism. It takes a whole, whole lot of effort to offend me, sir...so no worries."
Posted by Unknown on "A Pack of Snakes" by metaphormachine
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