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Passion
By metaphormachine
The most serious affection is passion
Certainly humiliated in front of others
A fool been made
Too much blazoned; lovely
Also probably mad
Keenly inclined towards each other
Do we fight our never-ending ...
battle.
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Copyright 2013 metaphormachine
Author's Note:
Poem 3 - Book 1 of 15 - A Gentle Time Robbery -Comments on "Passion"
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A former member wrote:
Ah. Passion and love... Mankind's true self-destruct method. So many wars fought, so much bloodshed, and many traitors created due to earning or maintaining another's affection... Very alluring poem here, friend...
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A former member wrote:
seesawing. i feel the push and pull, and i like it.
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On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, metaphormachine
(133)
wrote:
Thanks, dear! I'm honored ... :)
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On Monday, January 14, 2013, Ladyhawke
(394) wrote:
Love is the deadliest poison. Not because it kills..... but because it makes us want to live. Again, your style of simplicity makes your words have a meaning that sits deep within them. I like it.
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On Tuesday, January 15, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Interline & read between the lines tells me the truth more often ... & prepares a lot of leeway ... space to creativity, "Passion" & offers minimalism for our transgressive wonderful sin ... called love ...that's my personal den of iniquity ... You are a great female beholder! Thanks ... again! :)
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