Comments by All Members
- "I really like this. It's really interesting, i like how you call the past and future illusions, it's such an artistic and poetic way of describing memories. I also like the last line, it made me think. Interesting lines. Good work."
Posted by Unknown on "Stay In The Moment" by FearlessDragon
- ""hopelessness sets in, as my ears shatter in the silence." This is an abosolutely amazing piece of work... Bravo!"
Posted by Unknown on "Inhibited " by FearlessDragon
- "momentous mellow walk with your great laden voice.. brought down the sky to pace your successions cool careful fluidity..contemplation crafted excellence the rhythm and word choice. made me think on a personal lever and reflect as well within the image.. really enjoyed the read.thanks for posting !.... steps back into the white noise"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Inhibited " by FearlessDragon
- "I really hate you're feeling this way and I hope writing this made you feel a little better..Very awesome powerful write!!! "
Posted by Unknown on "Wasteland" by FearlessDragon
- "great depiction of a waste land and very dark I really enjoyed reading this and will at least one more time "
Posted by Unknown on "Wasteland" by FearlessDragon
- "This is especially heavy my sweet! I hope your are ok. Back to this poem. I am so saddened by its hopelessness! Lack of any faith. Like Wishing pain to swallow you whole..... Very powerful and I want to read it again and hear its voice! X"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Wasteland" by FearlessDragon
- "A lovely simple breakdown of reality, linking words in a manner where one line seems to end is the natural beginning of the next. Clever - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Have No Fear" by FearlessDragon
- "Very unusual and somewhat cryptic, the title suggested perscriptions to me, but not too sure, possibly something else to fill a void. Well done FD!"
Posted by dwells on "Associated Refillings" by FearlessDragon
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