Comments by All Members
- "i loved this one. every word molded tp describe the feeling exactly. becautifull done methos..you know the true meaning of desire."
Posted by Twilight on "Desire" by Methos
- "i am speechless. Truly speechless. you really hit it home with this one. I ... I have no words. Let this silence be to you a sign of how well you can write, taking away and saying all the readers' thought and words. "
Posted by unusual_blood on "No More..." by Methos
- "I thought I'd commented on this one already. Different style here, but it fits in just right. It has a sort of rythm to it that only increases the desire it has already provoked. Seems like you are starved, and this desire is your lover."
Posted by unusual_blood on "Desire" by Methos
- "My dearest Arik, like tim said, only you could do this. only you. not only is it a great poem that garentees a lil laugh at the end, it makes you think about what, as jaded wings said, could have inspired you to"
Posted by unusual_blood on "An unusual friend....." by Methos
- "very creative piece,full of draining recollections.made me think of things i thought were dead"
Posted by knightmirror on "The Child" by Methos
- "****,i'm glad that suicide reffered you to me.eventhough i should've got off my ass and read you before that.thanks for sharing"
Posted by knightmirror on "True emptiness" by Methos
- "laying still and cold
i felt a little depressed
my little one..
that was awsome.. but you know it's your fault that it died without it's dream becomming reality.. you had a feelng of power im sure. damn mosquito killer.. *raises a fist* :o)"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "An unusual friend....." by Methos
- "Jeez...I could feel the sorrow within these words. Wow...I feel like crying now...Such emotion your words provoke..."
Posted by Unknown on "Anniversary of Misery" by Methos
- "Mmm...this provokes desire. Excellent wording and phrasing. Beats into your head..."
Posted by Unknown on "Desire" by Methos
- "Hmm...I never commented on this. There are some excellent lines in this. They drip with...wistfulness? Thinking of how things have turned out? and I love the ending."
Posted by Unknown on "Ambition led me here..." by Methos
- "i hate watching little kids get pussy whiped by their mothers or who ever...they loose their character...they definatly turn into statues.....sadly *sniff sniff*~YeStErDaY~"
Posted by -Oz- on "The Child" by Methos
- "yea trying to fit in can be tough and some times leave u empty so to speak you showed the true emotion of those feelings"
Posted by Unknown on "True emptiness" by Methos
- "I hate mosquitos. They are the size of small dogs here... They carry little children away. I will smack everyone I see. :) Great write. haha :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "An unusual friend....." by Methos
- "only someone as profound as you could learn such wisdom from a hideous ,filthy,flying hypodermic...i really love this,brother.very inspiring.~tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "An unusual friend....." by Methos
- "You actually manage to evoke a sense of pity in me for a mosquito... I didn't think that was possible. :) Must be a great poem!! purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "An unusual friend....." by Methos
- "so well done. just left me in awe. the flow pulls the reader in and just takes them on this journey. *favorite* ~Drea~"
Posted by Drea on "No More..." by Methos
- "Just fucking awsome Methos....you have been sneaking into my brain again...you little peeping tom....cause this is exactly the way I feel right now with the stuff i m going through...bravo"
Posted by Jaded Jezzabelle on "No More..." by Methos
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