Comments by All Members
- "You do much to keep my attention, on this and your other works. Great word choice, pace and delivery. Perhaps we are all fictitious?"
Posted by Unknown on "Flaccid" by purr_verse
- "talk about impressive comment towers, it seems i am late to critique... but try as i may, you are ink tongue girl, and your writes always offer unparrallel advice and wisdom, and alternate thought... bravo."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Bent" by purr_verse
- "I'm so glad that Peri commented on this today, otherwise it might be an old work lost in the archives. I love the fourth stanza especially. Amazingly written. --Jes "
Posted by glasshouse on "Boudoir Requiem" by purr_verse
- "Oh honey. I love to come back and read this. Its so inspiring. A beautiful analogy and image. Where are you? Write more! I must check your page a few times a week so... you've got some catching up to do. ;) --Jes"
Posted by glasshouse on "Self: Sufficient" by purr_verse
- "I love the nonchalance. But I feel a hesitation. I have read this several times and not found words to tell you how I can relate, so take my fumbling compliments as both substitute and apology. You are a truly talented woman. I'm a little envious. --Jes"
Posted by glasshouse on "Flaccid" by purr_verse
- "It is a final flight from - and yet into - as we move away we recreate - free like a piano movement to be reinterpreted a thousand times and all beautiful - frozen moments in flight...A codex to any city...marvellous."
Posted by Solace on "Codex for Berlin (Triptych: Final Flight)" by purr_verse
- "but we do not truly move from it - we move like organic butterflies - and yet frozen there as iron, forever free in those moments that metamorphise into all moments - the slip stream - the nature of time, to be one to be all encompassing"
Posted by Solace on "Codex for Berlin (Triptych: Final Flight)" by purr_verse
- "The release is a trap - they're frozen - freedom is that capture of implied movement - we move, but we are still trapped there - so are they wings flapping eternally incessantly. We see the city in flight soaring"
Posted by Solace on "Codex for Berlin (Triptych: Final Flight)" by purr_verse
- ""And still the city becomes, we become it/no need for maps - for one navigates here by heart alone." I really need to say no more; you capture this Triptych perfectly in all it's geometrical and genius industrial rhythmic essence."
Posted by Unknown on "Triptych III: Rheinherz in Flammen" by purr_verse
- ""observification/involved observance/multiplicity" as said in Triptych 1 this is but an exemplary extension... (this is a Triptych I wish I wrote, but am very glad that Purr did - & I'm trying to forget the dedication w/ these thoughts as much as I apprec"
Posted by Unknown on "Triptych II: This Muted God" by purr_verse
- ""the gargantuan epic/more voyeur than tourist, more artist than voyeur." So very well said of what I feel is one of if not the best collection of poems at DP ( all the Triptych pieces, inc. the enigmatic 4th part). Your comments are fantastic, insightful,"
Posted by Unknown on "Triptych I: deConstruction Time Again" by purr_verse
- "And still the city becomes, we become it - the flames are within and imprint on the very walls, no need for maps - for one navigates here by heart alone...even in sleep reaching, waiting - aflame...brilliant natalie, just brilliant"
Posted by Solace on "Triptych III: Rheinherz in Flammen" by purr_verse
- "drunk on desire (and a hint of white) imagining the play of flames through the glass dancing / reflected off the river - painfully bliss kissed with certainty's revelation of inconsolable distance - all bound in together/ness"
Posted by Solace on "Triptych III: Rheinherz in Flammen" by purr_verse
- "liquorlascivious? a codex subbaritone wash?(where does my envy end?) and the symbols still burst like flames of the fire - more than and more than - purification through this amaze and drowned in its timeless glory"
Posted by Solace on "Triptych III: Rheinherz in Flammen" by purr_verse
- "time immemorial - to memorials - back to time immemorial - stepping into worlds of eternity, and the touch and the feel of solidity in such liquid memories that flow slip streaming along..."
Posted by Solace on "Triptych II: This Muted God" by purr_verse
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