Comments by All Members
- "People call me a 'black metal hippie'...which is true. They can laugh at me all they want. They can call me whatever they want, yet i am both of these things...dark and light. i've gone into the woods and sat so long for so many days, hours and hours with the wilderness growing bold around me, until i reached this place of silence where i was no longer human...a place where i was everything. i've always tried to return to that place but it's so hard in this society...but this poem speaks to me of that and makes me long for it once again. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Slumber" by Strataic
- "each read expands and clarifies what I can make from this ... it's like a formula , combining biology and science with inexplicable feelings , couched in creative imagery that cleverly flows through to that splendid last line ; creating an emotionally charged and vivid piece... yeah ... :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Salting Glass" by Strataic
- "heart thiefs and gut wrenching pluckers of heart strings ... I thought perhaps that shattering feeling and empty shell signals a new birth is imminent , however daunting that may now feel ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Dissociative Spec" by Strataic
- ""tea towel speechless, it's difficult now. To feel. To far happy." You're an amazing writing and you always seize to surprise me whenever I read a new post. "
Posted by Star on "Another Feeble Outlook" by Strataic
- "It's all about the alliteration in this one. I feel this way a lot actually. Glad you were able to get the feelings on this page, as I know it can be difficult to share at times. Again, loved the alliteration."
Posted by GhettoZombie on "Another Feeble Outlook" by Strataic
- "Something about "tea towel speeches" made my morning sun shine brighter... I want to use it 7 times for all the poetry crumbs in my notebook. I tend, I think, to get caught up..."
Posted by Maladroit on "Another Feeble Outlook" by Strataic
- "I love the way you punctuated this with the dashes. It really communicates the poem's rhythm."
Posted by Unknown on "Threadbare " by Strataic
- "some connections , are almost like plugging yourself in for a recharge ... energizing and alive...without them , we become less ... human ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Threadbare " by Strataic
- "It hurts to read this, & I'm not sure why. I think overall indifference is unhealthy for artists, but maybe that's just my experience. I don't write (nor do I appreciate the beauty of color) when I feel indifferent to things. You always make me think & feel, simultaneously, & that is a hard effect to achieve. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Somber Repertoire " by Strataic
- ""A lisp could quaver" I always wonder where you grasp some of your verses and gift them to us in your writings.. Always a unique and magical experience reading you - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "A Poets Electrified Paper" by Strataic
- "Beautiful vocabulary, so refined and grasping with quite a taste of ambiguity yet still a relentless echo of a meaning. Cryptic little old you, love it~ Cheery-o :)~ (Happy Birthday btw ♥)"
Posted by Symbol on "A Poets Electrified Paper" by Strataic
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