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- "What an interesting and fresh way to look at a common recurring theme. The idea of pillows as both a physical and metaphoric barrier to the heart and soul of another. And it would seem so easy to move those pillows aside to reach them but, as you question - are they happy enough to want to do this? If so, wouldn't they have? Or do they want to but are lost in their own head, dealing with their own stress that they simply haven't shared as a way to protect you from adding things to your plate? Such a delicate balance needed on these tightropes we walk. A very interesting read, thank you for sharing :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Where are you when i drift to dream" by BetaWolfinVA
- "This is something that I can really relate to at this point in my life. Paying for the mistakes I have made, a vision of where I'd like to be but if I think it in more than a whisper it could evaporate. And as I'm attempting to get there navigating all of the road blocks. And it would be so easy to sink to a different level but for some that would be worse than not achieving the dream. Well put,write on!"
Posted by Dilated View on "Choosing between Life and Honor" by BetaWolfinVA
- "An insightful captivating read.Every part of this poem blends with the other, becoming in whole a small masterpiece. "
Posted by Unknown on "Danger: Octopus" by BetaWolfinVA
- "I liked the mystical pagan connotations of this, the hermit is an archetype among mysticism, especially in the British Isles if I'm not mistaken. Last stanza is my favorite, but overall great poetry. "
Posted by Unknown on "Hermit lights the way" by BetaWolfinVA
- "this sort of writing has a tendency to lash out souls, it either makes them think about how they've been wronged, or how they've wronged others. there is a lot of quality in a poem which can unleash such a human reaction like that"
Posted by Unknown on "apology to a wife betrayed" by BetaWolfinVA
- "she is already used to spending most of her free time with others... she drives two men back and forth to work, and they talk a lot... i am not much of a talker.
were i a jealous man, this would be unacceptable...
as it is it feels rather unfair to me, she is out until midnight or three am talking, and she gets jealous when i simply text raven...
she really got pissed when i tried to go to ravens mothers memorial service, even though i asked her to come with me...
a few more steps, and she lets me have friends or "friends" as well...
but it is unlikely"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Life or Honor (Friday,_19_June_2015_09:02)" by BetaWolfinVA
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