Comments by All Members
- "I light a bonfire on the coast
in your savage name and
sing the rain song hoping you can hear it.... i loved that line sooo much, and this is astonishingly beautiful really.. i loved it to death... wow wonderful write here hun (: "
Posted by Star on "Phantosmia of Rain" by Maladroit
- "i love the bursts of imagery in this, paints the whole piece like a reverie all so quaint and sweet. plus i agree, i'd love to marry a poet myself."
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Sex with a Box" by Maladroit
- "Awww this is a really neat poem Mal I really love this one. Although you should never settle for any less then the best girl. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Puceau" by Maladroit
- "Ah, but then you wouldn't be you (and either would the other) - change is inevitable, even when it is sometimes at a glacial pace, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Puceau" by Maladroit
- "losing yourself in someone is pretty scary to me...but incredible i guess...a fusion in love...amazing write Mal."
Posted by DarkBlueClearWater on "Puceau" by Maladroit
- "You always give me the chills in one way or another, I love your poetry woman. and still wanna ravage you .. "
Posted by Devilish on "Puceau" by Maladroit
- "There is something so longing in this. Wanting so badly to help, to be helped. This hurt to read."
Posted by eidos on "Puceau" by Maladroit
- "Beautiful and I loved the dragonflies...wings...rainbow in the sun. So pretty...awwwee..."
Posted by Unknown on "Puceau" by Maladroit
- "awww... so many lines of this I could relate to, having a certain someone in mind... the purity, the innocence... but would such an one substitute oneself with a non-puceau... hmmm. I think the stability of sameness presents itself here as such an appealing trait, when often it is deemed a characteristic unbecoming... as if threatening the passion and devotion that makes wings take flight, and new beginnings seem like old endings... maybe. thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Puceau" by Maladroit
- "This read chaotically calm. Loved the thought of subliminally feeding emotions as a method to express the depth of the not quite expressables. Well played :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Unalloyed" by Maladroit
- "I love 'pawing for braille'....made me tear up. I love it all. I've tried so many times to write something for aspen, but i can't find the words...maybe if i could invent new words, or if i spoke in violin....this is beyond beautiful and i love it. "
Posted by Unknown on "Unalloyed" by Maladroit
- "Such a selfless giver you could recycle someones self so selflessly they might never know your roll in the matter"
Posted by FallenFaith on "Organic You" by Maladroit
- "I myself garden for amnesia. Love the blunt honesty, you have a way of expressing truthful feelings in words others could not comprehend in thought"
Posted by FallenFaith on "Kudzu Memoir" by Maladroit
- "The picture you paint here is tragic and left me feeling guilty for enjoying the format with which you seemed to drag me into an aftermath of an experience best gone unexperienced. This dug claws into emotions, thank you for sharing this pain.
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Posted by Dilated View on "Kudzu Memoir" by Maladroit
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