Comments by All Members
- "Had to look up a word in this piece (guess which?)...I always love it when I learn big, fancy new words. You challenge the mind but this is acutely felt in the heart. I also like the imagery of resentment sprouting lemon trees. There is an angry dissatisfaction searching here. Thanks for this tough little gem, Maladroit."
Posted by Unknown on "Circumstantial Evidence" by Maladroit
- "This is about a child. This is one of two things expressed about a child. Of course my feelings for my son contradict the feelings for the majority of the world.
Or maybe you mean the undertone of god? Did you see the note? Do you have a child? If you have a child, you will find yourself questioning higher powers and such, or at least I do.. Because he is that kind of beautiful- the kind so life altering that you look for a definition to source it. This is mostly just about an asshole question though- but thanks for reading"
Posted by Maladroit on "Send the Girl Tip-Toes" by Maladroit
- "Perhaps your works are specified to a certain circle of people ? I've read many of your poems but they seem to hit contradictions, perhaps it is my understanding of it that's contradictory. For the things I did understand sounded just as gloomy as can get for a poet, much enjoyed your poems for what I did comprehend."
Posted by Unknown on "Send the Girl Tip-Toes" by Maladroit
- "How did I miss you before.. this is beautifully crafted from a sharp mind, and I very much so love that type of poetry. Thank you, poet."
Posted by Skye on "Circumstantial Evidence" by Maladroit
- ""Vera Wang linens" I believe it indicates that you were married..... And it is another tale of your "misadventures" with this... lesser man. Getting married and ending up like this, it must turn everything so much worse...... I really enjoyed the poem. Shows a lot of rage and that you were in an awful situation for too long, waiting that it would get better...... that you tried...... I wish you luck for your future relationships."
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Kudzu Memoir" by Maladroit
- "Isn't it that way with most of us who tip toe in the night... We share only pieces of our selves. The sides we want them to see. because "If they had all of me they would not deisire me anymore". Sometimes I wish the "evidence" was even noticed. Fantastic write. Identified. The quiet guilt was defining.
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Posted by tmanzano on "Ensorcelling " by Maladroit
- "i read a book once that was written from a non verbal autistic son's point of view. i can't remember the name for the life of me, but it was so touching, the author giving his son a voice. this is barren and beautiful. i can only imagine your frustration, but i think our hearts are like radios. the thought brings me comfort, tuning in to lonely strangers and learning the frequency of those dear to us through love and error. maybe (i hope) it will to you, too. empathy is a powerful magic."
Posted by Unknown on "Send the Girl Tip-Toes" by Maladroit
- "our babies aren't sent as a curse, but a beautiful gift. a challage, one sent to the world to prove that beauty and intelligence take all forms.... chin up. our choldren will be great, if we show them the way...."
Posted by Malice In Wonderland on "Send the Girl Tip-Toes" by Maladroit
- "I thirsted for each new line in each stanza... So bittersweet, so red velvet, so brightly dark. So, poetic. Very turned on by this... Enjoyed this read. Makes me think I married wrong."
Posted by tmanzano on "Sex with a Box" by Maladroit
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