Comments by All Members
- "Sounding like it's time to become more responsible and predictable maybe, while old habits die slowly, and the times change us as we protest in our confusion. Cheers Mala - cerebral as usual and now I need an aspirin or two. Different used to be good. "
Posted by dwells on "Mouthful of Feathers" by Maladroit
- "Lip-synced nightmares curled inside of my ear,
these "Objects" read the mirror, "are closer than they appear." - nice! I love the imagery of this one. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Gearbox{ing}" by Maladroit
- "Now that the world has gotten smaller it seems like these technological advances that make it so easy to talk drive us apart, though on the other hand would we have met some otherwise? How many of us want to follow through and meet each other face to face? Even if all you go home with is an experience, at least for a moment you were alive somewhere were the pain was bearable with purpose. We can't hide from pain or choose not to feel it. If you can you're not human. We walk through it. I like this write."
Posted by Phalanx on "Eye Eater" by Maladroit
- "I remember once when I looked at the end of the hall. My mom placed a full length mirror there. The mirror did not last. "
Posted by tmanzano on "Eye Eater" by Maladroit
- "What a great poem! I like how your style of writing expresses the message of this love poem with unique imagery, created by the easy to imagine vocabulary melding & flowing so well! This was a great read! :D"
Posted by Unknown on "Sex with a Box" by Maladroit
- "I don't go barking up trees either. Though I understand that I am more the person that finds it easier to push others away. I don't often cry about the fact that I am alone. I chose my loneliness. This was a great eye opening piece.. "
Posted by Unknown on "Eye Eater" by Maladroit
- "the author's note.... and those last notes, so intense and plaguingly beautiful a heartstrum, falling upon consciously dumb eyes and deaf ears. i'm always listening. always."
Posted by Unknown on "Gearbox{ing}" by Maladroit
- "you said it all. there is nothing left for me to add except perhaps an echo... and an understanding of being the eater and the eaten. xo"
Posted by Unknown on "Eye Eater" by Maladroit
- "Some people are too volatile to love. We have a penchant for self destruction or maybe just too much of a gypsy soul. Someone like that needs to know that you're paralleled in the same direction, that want the same destination even though the charts aren't written. Where are you willing and wanting to go is what you have ask yourself. Regardless, you shouldn't have to grind gears. Nice write. I like it."
Posted by Phalanx on "Gearbox{ing}" by Maladroit
- "Only seen this warning celebrated in poetry once before as I recall, or maybe it was a song? Nevertheless a fine finish to a revving simile stuck in neutral, with an earworm dirge perhaps, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Gearbox{ing}" by Maladroit
- "I know someone like this. "I know you- you'll fall to the floor wondering why nobody called when you pushed them away, why nobody pushed back, thinking someone is meant to save you". Some people are just addicted to misery. beautiful piece. "
Posted by Unknown on "Eye Eater" by Maladroit
- "Sounds like my ex and - my bad for not being the end all with the wherewithal to entertain, amuse, and tickle slightly - but never significantly. Both left wanting something more, cheers Mala! "
Posted by dwells on "Eye Eater" by Maladroit
- "...your words & emotions come back to you bc the one they are intended for could not appreciate them. there is strength in your beauty..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Eye Eater" by Maladroit
- "very different, i like it, people always want to be saved or save someone and it doesn't work unless the person wants to be better. I really loved this one."
Posted by Unknown on "Eye Eater" by Maladroit
- "Wow this was a very passionate piece! The emotions overflow with grace and style, love it!"
Posted by Unknown on "Eye Eater" by Maladroit
- "Yes Mala i agree with cipher i wish i could bookmark this. you will say what most won't. and make it sound so gun loading sweet. that is what i love about you .. much respect poetess."
Posted by Devilish on "Eye Eater" by Maladroit
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