Comments by All Members
- "I agree with urbanhumility.. This was a very beautiful piece. It's so richly complex that traditional rhetorical concepts are unnecessary. Thank you for sharing. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Embrace" by JadedHeart
- "Oh, that hurts. This irony used to hurt me as though I were being cheated on. There's sometimes a good explanation for them being gone, but damn it still hurts. Thank your for writing this, I am one of those who can appreciate this. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Within a Dream" by JadedHeart
- "I really enjoyed this poem. Well written and thought out. Keep writing!"
Posted by Unknown on "yearn" by JadedHeart
- "We normally do "yearn" more when that special someone isn't there anymore. We sometimes don't appreciate something, until it is missing... so all we can do is long for it to return. Keep our hope alive at least. A melancholy read. Cheers :)"
Posted by Symbol on "yearn" by JadedHeart
- "Nice requiem for the departed, seems to be in conflict with the closing, unless they return. Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "For You" by JadedHeart
- "Perfection is so over rated that I despise it. I guess its because im fueled by the same drive to accomplish it as well. I can relate to the poem all around and so many ways. It seems that I have a different face for every person. I dont remember what I truly even look like anymore. good post. ][ ]["
Posted by Unknown on "For You" by JadedHeart
- "We all play the fool from time to time. Short, sweet and to the point. Saying much with few words is brilliant."
Posted by Nehema on "Again" by JadedHeart
- "Oh hunny.. Your no fool... i love you.. =).. Beautiful writing my darling.. "
Posted by Devilish on "Again" by JadedHeart
- "Nice. I've built a wall around myself to protect me from the world. but now its so tall nothing can get through. "
Posted by Unknown on "Hollowed Out" by JadedHeart
- "Love the verse on tormenting dreams. Not what I expected, but better than I thought. nice poem"
Posted by Unknown on "Oceans" by JadedHeart
- "I can very much relate to this. This shows a persons struggles with self image perhaps and how they want to shed a new skin and become someone better than themselves. Very nicely written good job."
Posted by Unknown on "Hollowed Out" by JadedHeart
- "To me this poem seems like a persons struggles with life and how they don't fit in and how they will do anything to be free. I can very much relate to this. Beautiful words you have chosen to write this :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Musing" by JadedHeart
- "I can very much relate to this because I have lost someone and I have felt this same exact thing. You choose your words very beautifully."
Posted by Unknown on "Oceans" by JadedHeart
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