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Within a Dream
By JadedHeart
I dreamt about you in the
midnight hours.
So vivid I could almost feel you there.
You
could hear my heart beating out of control,
you were so close I could
almost stroke your hair.
You held my gaze so steady, your hand upon
my face.
You were so real, I could almost kiss your lips.
You
whispered my name in soft low tones, words didn't seem to matter.
It
was almost perfect, so real, vivid and true.
I was almost close enough
to love you,
then I awoke without you. . .
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Copyright 2012 JadedHeart
Published on Friday, March 23, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, January 14, 2019, Jonas Robinson
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wrote:
Oh, that hurts. This irony used to hurt me as though I were being cheated on. There's sometimes a good explanation for them being gone, but damn it still hurts. Thank your for writing this, I am one of those who can appreciate this. :)
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A former member wrote:
"I was almost close enough to love you"... i felt this line... nice..
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A former member wrote:
Like my rose said, very good ♦
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A former member wrote:
ive been here before, this is a really good write
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