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- ""That moment alone!" - There are some moments so marvelous that we remember them forever. Beautifully conveyed!"
Posted by Unknown on "...Lost..." by dumbone
- "Someday soon they will look at you and call you "her beautiful man", and in that moment you will live forever, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "...Lost..." by dumbone
- "the thing is... i like to write short and criptic mostly general stuff... thank you for reading"
Posted by dumbone on "...do you..." by dumbone
- "Dum - wondering if Jet (somebody's name maybe) or Yet (still)? We all go through those phases and they say if you aren't liberal by the time you are 25, then you have no heart. If you still are liberal by the time you are 45, then you have no brain! Always enjoy quoting that truism, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "...do you..." by dumbone
- "Such an alliance with nature is something I always longed for, to find it in a person, but all in vain.Fine work indeed I must say.Reminds me of Zen poetry, written by the ancient samurai."
Posted by Ortolan on "Alliance" by dumbone
- "I love this..... It sounds so much like every dark poet I know.... My favorite lines
…cemetery during the night…
Cold air tickles her nose,
She is there, in tranquility.
Bows to the lonely souls, to their last breathes.
And takes a picture of hers future resting place
......... Thank you so much for sharing this with us :)"
Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "…Lonely…" by dumbone
- "...'she breaks her solitude into lonely portraits': that is the type of line that we poets beg for. just 1 correction: in the last line, 'hers' should be 'her'..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "…Lonely…" by dumbone
- "Wonderful perspective and composition in this piece, much akin to photography, thanks for the artistry!"
Posted by dwells on "…Lonely…" by dumbone
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