…Lonely…
By dumbone
…Lonely…
On a pupil of vanquished dreams
She roams over the distant fields.
She hopes…
That her photography
Will cover her individuality
That difference, she wishes to achieve
She breaks her solitude into lonely portraits
…On a bench…
She sits alone
Watching the cars move
She captures their haste, colors,
And singles out the race.
For mankind must move forward.
…On a hilltop under the tree…
While the grass plays with her feet
Her lenses are focused
To capture the swing of strength,
Old branches enveloped with new green miracle.
The motion of the still.
…cemetery during the night…
Cold air tickles her nose,
She is there, in tranquility.
Bows to the lonely souls, to their last breathes.
And takes a picture of her future resting place
Comments on "…Lonely…"
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A former member wrote:
That's is beautiful yet a hard dose of reality.
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On Thursday, August 28, 2014, Dark Chocolate
(18) wrote:
Smells like melancholy.. Beautiful
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On Friday, December 6, 2013, infinitebeing
(80) wrote:
I enjoyed reading this write... thank u for sharing :)
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On Wednesday, January 30, 2013, dumbone
(62) wrote:
thank you friends for reading and commenting...
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On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
I love this..... It sounds so much like every dark poet I know.... My favorite lines …cemetery during the night… Cold air tickles her nose, She is there, in tranquility. Bows to the lonely souls, to their last breathes. And takes a picture of hers future resting place ......... Thank you so much for sharing this with us :)
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On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...'she breaks her solitude into lonely portraits': that is the type of line that we poets beg for. just 1 correction: in the last line, 'hers' should be 'her'...
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On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Wonderful perspective and composition in this piece, much akin to photography, thanks for the artistry!
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful (:
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A former member wrote:
Interesting.... Nice poem.