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"Thank You, carlosjackal. Your read and comments mean a lot. still kickin it. thanx for asking. sauntering back to the community soon. Love & respect for the Darklings. You know, family is everything. "
Posted by ruthless48 on "main feature" by ruthless48

"So glad you finally went with "main feature" for the title, works perfectly and doesn't give the game away. An amazing piece you've written and I can't believe I'm only now discovering your work thanks to Nae's fave poet list. I hope you're well."
Posted by carlosjackal on "main feature" by ruthless48

"Thank you for the read, natalie! weâ€™re wordsmiths. grinding syllables like bits of metal in a machine shop until they fit & clip, synchronized & smooth. "
Posted by ruthless48 on "red beans and rice under a chandelier " by ruthless48

" Thank you for the read, natalie. Simply retelling of a few moments shared with another homeless individual, as i was at the time as well, when we â€˜hitâ€™ one gas station after another to buy powerball lottery tickets on the morning of a big draw."
Posted by ruthless48 on "puppy dog tails" by ruthless48

"Thank you, natalie! Venice, FL beach. That lil dude is a Laughing Gull. I am again, now too, laughing & smiling whilst in a much better place in time. Thank You for the read! "
Posted by ruthless48 on "James Joyce on the beach" by ruthless48

"He seems so pensive, like the world of decision rests on his tiny shoulders... Cool reference. Nice pic!"
Posted by natalie on "James Joyce on the beach" by ruthless48

"This was like gathering scattered thoughts/memories and putting them neatly together. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "puppy dog tails" by ruthless48

"So much said in so few words, I'm sure many can relate. I like that you have your own style of penning your work...Cudos! "
Posted by natalie on "red beans and rice under a chandelier " by ruthless48

"Thank You, Samantha, for the read & your kind words. Darklings all inspire each other as a vital creative community. âœŠ to You as a fellow writer! "
Posted by ruthless48 on "red beans and rice under a chandelier " by ruthless48

"brings back some memories, thank you for the inspiration ^-^"
Posted by Samantha Crocker on "red beans and rice under a chandelier " by ruthless48

"Thank you, Alanarchy! Funny how some moments hang in the air long enough to settle into words. Thank you for reading my postcard to the world out loud. Humbled & much respect for your read. "
Posted by ruthless48 on "red beans and rice under a chandelier " by ruthless48

"An interesting, voyeuristic penning. Intriguing and satisfying to read. I read it aloud the 2nd time. Best that way. Write on."
Posted by Alanarchy on "red beans and rice under a chandelier " by ruthless48

"thank you, carlosjackal. such is our poetry pen in the control of our mindfulness journalist. sometimes to our annoyance, but always spitting rhymes of our own moments in time. thank you for the comment & the read. âœŒï¸"
Posted by ruthless48 on "ripped your T-shirt" by ruthless48

"This aches, yearns and blazes in all the best ways and grabs the reader from the very opening.."my shy hologram" :O)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "ripped your T-shirt" by ruthless48

"This was quite fascinating. I wonder what I would do if I could write a letter to the early Christians. I would probably try and stop the witch-hunts that happened which, basically never ended in our Justice system, we just found new innocent scapegoats to justify our supremacy. I really enjoyed your work here; It's really great. Thank you and sorry if I vented too much in this post."
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Tangerine Dream" by ruthless48

"the way you mix science and poetry is impressive."
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "from outer space to my heart" by ruthless48

"Rereading this for the first time in a while and I still stopped at the watch. I guess even when time marches forward somethings remain as is. Still elicits a smile. "
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "Shopping List" by ruthless48

"I was thinking of this recently and I am glad I found it again. "
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "Ophelia in the bathtub" by ruthless48

"Thank you~ funny how the cosmos allows us to be incidental reporters. Your kind words are sincerely appreciated ~"
Posted by ruthless48 on "Merry Christmas, Time Traveler" by ruthless48

"Thank you, kinkifrog, for your intuition and strength. The loss of such a young, giving individual as Tom is truly "dis-empowering". We are working to live our lives as he did to complete a fitting tribute. How can a parent thank such selfless giving on behalf of their child? Thank you for kindness in words. The Korean sijo offers more creative freedom than the Japanese Haiku. I feel i owe this knight in shining armor, true friend of my daughter's, so much more than 45 syllables. I'm told all in his life held the same indebtedness~"
Posted by ruthless48 on "a sijo for Tom" by ruthless48

"Thank you for your support rwb35. Tom was a true friend of my daughter for eight years. It is only after our loss, i have learned his extended hand was offered, countless times, throughout my daughter's difficult climb in life's journey. How can a parent repay that? Counted syllables in a Korean sijo, while i made kimchi is all i have~Thank you for your kindness and for the read. "
Posted by ruthless48 on "a sijo for Tom" by ruthless48

"Sorry for your loss. It is obvious, that whoever Tom was, he made an impact on your life. Thank you for sharing your pain"
Posted by rwb35 on "a sijo for Tom" by ruthless48

"this is the distilled essence of grief and loss...beautiful in it's intensity of feeling...jagged, helpless and dis-empowering yet sustaining the depth of your connection...thank you for introducing me to this form and to your friend... splendid tribute"
Posted by kinkifrog on "a sijo for Tom" by ruthless48

"Thank you, Damien! the longer one mingles on this planet, the more obvious it becomes that these moments are truly rare and precious~"
Posted by ruthless48 on "when matter melts" by ruthless48

"thank you, all. i do save my money now. i would rather collect those "happenstance" moments. they are like gold. catching a glance of a person, to share a quantum of time, as we all keep running in this human race~ "
Posted by ruthless48 on "puppy dog tails" by ruthless48

"you've left me breathless again, Regent of Rhyme. those moving tangles in words are a can of worms. your laser scalpel acuity keeps me holding my breath as i take in all you say. humbled, i feel as if the Queen of a court has spoken to the heart on my serf sleeve, looking into instead of above and beyond. yes, the mother/child chains that opaquely bind cannot be rattled with speech to those who keep us captive. so instead, bolt cutter words, written down, cut us free~ thank you"
Posted by ruthless48 on "can opener" by ruthless48

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