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- "Interesting write...unfaithful...caused by the alcohol, or, does the fact that she is being unfaithful drive her to the drinking...
Another encounter of loathe between two that draws me near... : )"
Posted by redfurrydragon on "drunken kisses." by jodeanna
- "One of them is probably a strangler fig tree (as the name implies). Very mature piece for 15, indeed, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "not about trees." by jodeanna
- "Nice... If, as the title states, its not about trees, then "each sucking life from the other to survive" is an interesting choice words... Good work, Jo.
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Posted by ho Thanaton on "not about trees." by jodeanna
- "
Always feed your starving child
with bruised flesh stretched taut
against his tiny frame,
whose wide eyes gleam with
more knowledge than
you could ever claim
*my fav part*"
Posted by Unknown on "feed the starving child." by jodeanna
- "She doesn't say a word
and I'm grateful for that
because words are too hard to erase
*my fav part*"
Posted by Unknown on "drunken kisses." by jodeanna
- "Beautifully written. So very honest and perfect.. Thank you for your comments on my work i appreciate it.. "
Posted by Devilish on "alone at night." by jodeanna
- "Ouch... I thought this would be fun, but instead it's a painful memorie.. Still, well done. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "drunken kisses." by jodeanna
- "You're right. I would have always wondered "What if?" I showed it to him and he was very flattered."
Posted by jodeanna on "impassioned." by jodeanna
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