not about trees.

By jodeanna

 Two seeds grow
into two trees 
that intertwine
at the vulnerable roots,
each sucking life
from the other
to survive.

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Copyright 2012 Jodeanna Marie
Published on Tuesday, February 14, 2012.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I wrote this when I was fifteen.
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  • A former member wrote: sounds like a nomal married life great work

  • A former member wrote: awesome poem, really like it!

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, February 14, 2012, FadedBlues (2168)By person wrote:

    Jo, a profound & penetrating poem, so sad in the simple truth of it...

  • dwells On Tuesday, February 14, 2012, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    One of them is probably a strangler fig tree (as the name implies). Very mature piece for 15, indeed, thanks.

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Tuesday, February 14, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (303)By person wrote:

    I really like this poem. Great metaphor.

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