Comments by All Members
- "I didn't know the big bang could be so poetic. Check out my 13 Haiku work, one of the haiku is about a black hole you might like it but anyways I'm feeling your science themed poems."
Posted by Alchemist on "14 Billion Years Ago..." by Polaris
- "I'm happy to see a new member that is a sci-fi writer I dig that. Welcome to the Valley, and I loved your bio."
Posted by Alchemist on "Polaris" by Polaris
- "Thank you. I was trying to convey how guilt can overwhelm and cloud your judgement."
Posted by Polaris on "Fate" by Polaris
- "Seems a somewhat harsh self-imposed sentence. Guilt has the ability to shrink and swell to fit the need. This piece touches on that nicely. Welcome to Dark Poetry. You're in the right place."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Fate" by Polaris
- "Lives lost, everyone grieves. Sadness...this was very good and great---keep writing. "
Posted by Unknown on "Fate" by Polaris
- "Two lives lost any many hearts are broken, so sad and thanks for this offering, cheers."
Posted by dwells on "Fate" by Polaris
- "Much solitude and sorrow, but very well written ..."
Posted by Unknown on "Fate" by Polaris
- "The evolutionary process never had it so good. The thing that leaves me in total awe of the world we live in is the incredible diversity of life and even though 99% of all species are now extinct oh what amazing creatures they must have been. I feel your poem is a tribute to this and I tip my hat knowingly."
Posted by Taunting The Reaper on "14 Billion Years Ago..." by Polaris
- "I have had such experiances. With these 'so called friends'. I am sorry it happened to you. But, yeah, don't waste your time on them. Spend your time finding those who WILL BE your true friends. They're out there. And chances are, they're just as anxious to find you, as you are them. Just, be patient. Great write though. Very personal and expressive. "
Posted by Ladyhawke on "So Called Friends" by Polaris
- "Thank you. I know what you mean. Even with this one poem it's like a weight lifted off my shoulders. "
Posted by Polaris on "So Called Friends" by Polaris
- "That hate can eat you up inside, I know, pen it out, it's more satisfying putting it out there that way, in my opinion.... nicely penned."
Posted by Magdalena on "So Called Friends" by Polaris
- "Welcome to the vally. I look forward to seeing more from you. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Resolve" by Polaris
- "Thanks. I'm a little less self conscious now, but I guess every first time writer is."
Posted by Polaris on "Resolve" by Polaris
- "First poem, ever? Wow, I would not have known this if you didnt say anything. You did quite well. I love anything having to do with dreams/visions. Welcome to DP :)"
Posted by Phantasmagoria on "Resolve" by Polaris