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  • ""Don?t long to be her lost in the silhouette of angels Casting shadows long restless from the temple I built Come to me as you are in the stillness of your beauty And watch me awaken with the touch of your heart"./....ive so much personal commentary on this strophe alone......your words feel otherworldly, timeless, long ago, forlorn and sweetly supined. . .. . . a gentle moving piece such as this is absolutely needed in this dark fading world; glad to have found it, to have moved through it, to have heard its resonance.. .....thank you."
    Posted by Unknown on "Unicornian Ways" by Silver Spectre
  • " In the words of my grandfather, getting old is fun, being old fucking sucks. I tend to agree with him, nice post, waiting is a poison."
    Posted by HeadpatSlut on "Getting Old" by Silver Spectre
  • "For a long time this has been my favorite work on Dark Poetry and, after a time off from DP, I still stubble upon it often and fall for it again. I thankful you've written it because it feels like when i read it i needed to read it. STar"
    Posted by stargaze0991 on "Unicornian Ways" by Silver Spectre
  • "sadness so magnificently expressed cant help but become a form of beauty...this built a heaviness on my heart and with that last line resigned to leave me in the form of a sigh ~kristy"
    Posted by Sin on "What she was and would never be" by Silver Spectre
  • "Beautiful, arms as frail as the sun, eyes closing like a sundown, i feel everything beautifully and yet i am inadequate against this beauty."
    Posted by Unknown on "Sails Wave" by Silver Spectre
  • "i love the way you ended this piece, and it flowed so well. you've created yet another beutiful poem"
    Posted by Unknown on "Sails Wave" by Silver Spectre
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