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Silence and Thunder
By Silver Spectre
She feels the silence of the desert grow
As the snow falls upon her face
And hears the thunder of the desert rose
The falling flower of the whitest flake
Fluttering like a butterfly dancing on her cheek
She hears the silence and the thunder grow
As she walks through the ivory weep
She cherishes every sound she makes
The pressing of her foot into the snow
The new found presence of her voice
The importance of her thoughts has shown
In the silence and the thunder her voice has grown
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Copyright 2003 Silver Spectre
Published on Sunday, October 5, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Silence and Thunder"
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On Sunday, October 8, 2006, Circe Avalon
(115)
wrote:
Very nice the picture you paint in my mind is very white
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A former member wrote:
**Butterfly..xxx...
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A former member wrote:
God your work makes me want to give up trying all together...i really can't describe how touching i thought this was."As she walks through the ivory weep"your way of wording things is so...i dont know.But i love it all the same...Butterflt..xxx...
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On Monday, October 13, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
"she walks through the ivory weep "..captivating and intoxicating...loved this...
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On Thursday, October 9, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(234) wrote:
this is greatness and so much more, the plot and the rhyme scheme+Fallen One+
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On Sunday, October 5, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
beautiful....~Drea~
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A former member wrote:
Nice use of natural images, and i love the last line. Good work!
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A former member wrote:
verry good write .. love it ...
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A former member wrote:
I'm speechless.. very good ... GrtZ
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