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Sweet Mystery
By Silver Spectre
Would the wind that flows
Over red petals stay
On her lips that call to mind
Of a time long ago
When the world was still
When lovers bathed in wine
Or would it soften when
She shines so bright
Would it be bold
When she calls the night
Which covers me
In an electric glow
That brings me to her side
And I bet she knows not how
She seeps deep into me
To where I can taste the vine
Of the fruit that comes
With her sweet mystery
That captures me tonight.
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Copyright 2003 Silver Spectre
Published on Friday, September 23, 2022.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Sweet Mystery"
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A former member wrote:
Wow, you are a great writer. I loved this poem. Please keep writing.
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On Tuesday, August 30, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273)
wrote:
Now this is wonderful, such soothing words, indeed a sweet mystery.
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A former member wrote:
"when lovers bathed in wine" Ahhh....this made my heart tingle. Sweetness flooded me with every word.
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A former member wrote:
Hey i agree with velvet! i like this alot!! it flows good.
LEAH
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On Monday, October 13, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
wow, I cant believe no-one has commented on this piece..I really love it..it has a feeling of ages that have passed, an aged grace that is not captured often...great job here...bravo
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On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
"Would the wind that flows Over red petals stay On her lips that call to mind"...nothing i can would do this work justice..so.. i'm not goin to try ~Drea~
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