Comments by All Members
- "Marvelous metaphor for the complexity that she not doubt is indeed, inspired Cadymae, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "The Unbinding" by cadymae
- ""the tragedy of an attentive mind." I once asked an ex-DEA agent why he gets high now. He replied: "I woke up." Waking up is hard to do.... (N that sounds like the beginning of a poem there... :)"
Posted by cadymae on "Listening to dust fall" by cadymae
- "the tragedy of an attentive mind... such a yellow vignette... the closing of the word, the report unheard. Is it better to bare the whips and scorns of time... or to one's own quietus make? Nicely crafted window on the passing of love, of life.... of time. You work the absence well within your words. Thank you *bows*"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Listening to dust fall" by cadymae
- "Roadway romance in the big rigs, what a concept! Thanks for the eye-opener with this slice of life, cheers to you Cadymae!"
Posted by dwells on "The Itinerant Mistress" by cadymae
- "...there is pride in the way this is spread across the width of the page, & contentment in the final lines... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "The Middle Ages" by cadymae
- "The energy draining heat, the damn sun burn and that sand you got to love it. After that now I want to go take a shower and go out to dinner, which is what I generally do after a long day on the beach."
Posted by Alchemist on ""Aftertaste"" by cadymae
- "Reminds me of about ten years ago waking up young and full of life after partying all night. Those were the days."
Posted by Alchemist on "The Middle Ages" by cadymae
- "a candy pink sateen.... a synecdoche that speaks volumes of envious... mussed sheets in candy pink sateen. Grey.. is it not the color of solitude? "we both dressed wrong"... I like that line... the envy of a different wrong... maybe we are always envious of what another regrets. And the sun shines on all... these mornings are less joyous as the ages past, perhaps. I hope all is well for you. thank you. "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "The Middle Ages" by cadymae
- "Nobody escapes the final ending, or is it really the end? And are we actually that individual, or just perhaps imagined so? Does the butterfly know the caterpillar? Cheers CM, much enjoyed the natural equivalence."
Posted by dwells on "Fecundity" by cadymae
- "'The skeleton behind the flesh that was painted to look pretty.' I love that line!
I love this entire thing, it is excellent. Wonderful work!
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Posted by Phantasmagoria on "Dancing bones" by cadymae
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