Comments by All Members
- "LOL at your comment. On the other side of town I'm considered a "youth." The part of town where I can afford a mortgage however... I'm OLD."
Posted by cadymae on "Get off my lawn" by cadymae
- "They say that in the very near future it won't be what you can afford, but rather what you can keep. Well said piece, and some day I'll catch the school kid who always drops candy wrappers in my front yard too, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Get off my lawn" by cadymae
- "I love this poem. Though I've got too say I'm more like the guy your trying too keep off your yard.haha. I still really like this poem!"
Posted by Unknown on "Get off my lawn" by cadymae
- "ah the false-bright society... how it hides wreckage but never the un useable ness of us all. thanks
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Posted by The Dybbuk on "A whisky rinse" by cadymae
- "perspectives change, doubtless... so much sinks in... and so much is lost. thanks for the wise words; think I'll go back to sleep now."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Untitled" by cadymae
- "Tnx for always reading and offering feedback. It is fun hearing how my writings are interpreted."
Posted by cadymae on "A whisky rinse" by cadymae
- "Just a figment of the glitter world that only some of us can visit breifly, and still return whole perhaps, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "A whisky rinse" by cadymae
- "Was staring at my wrecked Kawasaki in the po-po lot... Broken nose n stitched up cheek n lip."
Posted by cadymae on "Ode to Speed" by cadymae
- "After further contemplation, perhaps "the first time" could be an alternate title, maybe?"
Posted by dwells on "Ode to Speed" by cadymae
- "Sounds like a Mazda to me, cheers and still pondering, but baby scab has opened up another universe, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Ode to Speed" by cadymae
- "we must share a vocabulary... or something... I was most taken by the note.... must be the dormancy of torpor, the sound that breaks the poem? the satiation that stills the rhythm of life... of love? of the desire, the lust, the drive that makes the viscera move, that rises within the animal the animus that creates what it is that captivates... that captures and sedates? interesting rhyme... I liked the "O" ... always a place for the supine? maybe, thanks to you. "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "The poem that fell apart." by cadymae
- "Those words.... wow... Everything is well blended in together, perfectly. ;) This poem is like a roller coaster- not the speed of it- the gradual atmosphere intensifying and then easing, coming to an end... if that makes sense lol. Great write. "
Posted by Symbol on "The poem that fell apart." by cadymae
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