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A whisky rinse
By cadymae
I press my face through your skin and look around
Surveying
my handiwork and others as well
Your sweetness belies
the wreckage inside.
The broken
un us- able ness
of it all
You are best gazed upon though smoky hi-balls
and false-bright
society.
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Copyright 2012 cadymae
Published on Monday, November 5, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
This site simply has too many members. How is it that I haven't read you yet, cadymae? I'll be rectifying that soon...this is excellent :)
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On Tuesday, November 6, 2012, FadedBlues
(2169)
wrote:
...maybe it's more comfortable to face the imperfections in all of us w/slightly blurred vision...
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On Monday, November 5, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
Just a figment of the glitter world that only some of us can visit breifly, and still return whole perhaps, cheers!
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On Monday, November 5, 2012, cadymae
(73) wrote:
Tnx for always reading and offering feedback. It is fun hearing how my writings are interpreted.
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On Tuesday, November 6, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
The pleasure is all mine, keep writing girl!
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