Comments by All Members
- "Wow, I very much like this one... This is very deep and vivid in its imagery... I would like to add you to my favorite poets list and bookmark you but the site is currently not letting me, so I will just let you know it instead..."
Posted by Unknown on "Love In Hell" by WatchTheWorldCollapse
- "The way you turned the tides of the emotions within this work it truly awesome... At first you feel dark and dank, then light and free, and finally the realization sets in... Truly fantastic, keep it up..."
Posted by Unknown on "Bottomless Pit" by WatchTheWorldCollapse
- "very cool and very melodic. i would have asked if these were lyricas if you hadnt of said so. theres a nice melody to it when its read. thanks!"
Posted by haunted on "Sunder" by WatchTheWorldCollapse
- "Last line was a bit of a reach, consider perhaps "Man descends, his death will not be quick" or something similar. Overall quite dark and downcast with a foreboding tone to the narrative. I liked it, thanks!"
Posted by dwells on "Vivid Armageddon " by WatchTheWorldCollapse
- "Nice job on this ode to a "down on their luck" vocalist perhaps? Misery loves company, or just sharing pain and failure? Still pondering, thanks. "
Posted by dwells on "say goodbye" by WatchTheWorldCollapse
- "How about "Useful Idiots" for a title, or not. This was quite the thoughtful piece, isolated and insulated people, nice job."
Posted by dwells on "Untitled" by WatchTheWorldCollapse
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